Review of chapter "Twice Told Tales" from VillageOrchid
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I like that Xander felt he could trust Hammond. Certainly a complex situation, and very good on you for using existing mythologies rather than making up something so original that the crossover readers wouldn't be interested.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Stars in their Courses" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Can't remember if you already introduced "Major Carter's Uncle" but am enjoying the twists in the ride.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Riddles in the Dark" from VillageOrchid
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I like their non-evil teleportation system. Heavy stuff in this chapter. Well dramatized POVs.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Granted, I haven't read the update yet - wanted to say 'Damn glad ta see ya!' ... OK, maybe I cheated a little and peaked at the opening paragraph... or two... but no more than that!!!
Really enjoy this story, so an update always makes the day go better.