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Review of chapter "Storm Rising" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [12 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Storm Rising" from sdavidm
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Great story so far, but surely dawn's escape plan to the SGC would be a corner jump right into Hammond's office. Why would they even bother with any other mode of transport that could be intercepted?
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [20 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What I Did On My Summer Vacation Pt. 3" from EnchanterTim
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Sergeant Aylward and Captain Loring, eh?

I assume you're a fan of S.M. Stirling's The Change series. 8)

interesting story so far.
Review By [EnchanterTim] • Date [4 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Storm Rising" from draconis
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Another good chapter. I really like your idea that Glory's worshippers (and apparently all materials organic and inorganic (the buildings and trees)) are warped by her energy.

You may be addressing these in the upcoming chapters, but some things that came to mind were:

I would guess the main question I have for this chapter would be why Oz and Dawn didn't just portal directly into the SGC 'mountain' (as the Miskatonic crew have done before) rather than going first to the Denver House. That would have been not only faster but far more secure. It's difficult to think that both Oz and Dawn wouldn't have been given the details for a sigil to the SGC that would provide their immediate escape.

I'm also wondering whether Xander assigned the book to Faith to reduce his temptation to use it again...or to have it handy when they go after the bad guys.

Thanks for the update.
Review By [draconis] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Storm Rising" from BlueEyedBrigadier
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Absolutely stunning stuff! The returned threat of Glory and her minions was a brilliant twist, and having Dawn kidnapped steps from safety is the kind of last-minute drama a good Whedonverse tale or crossover needs to have!

Can't wait for more to arrive!
Review By [BlueEyedBrigadier] • Date [1 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Storm Rising" from Elleria
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I'm so happy to see an update! Love this story!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Storm Rising" from jgoodman
Review:
Great chapter, Love this story and can't wait to read more
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [31 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Storm Rising" from (Recent Donor)draconin
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Excellent! The game's afoot. Please don't leave us with a semi-cliffie too long though. :-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Riddles in the Dark" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
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"As far as Buffy could tell, the only reason it was still standing was because the termites were all holding hands."

That was fucking brilliant.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What I Did On My Summer Vacation. Pt. 2" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
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One quick note: "head wound/head injury" and "wound to the head" mean vastly different things. A "head wound" means an injury to the brain; if Giles suffered a concussion from the graze (HIGHLY likely due to it coming from an M82!), then he'd have a head injury, because the brain was affected. However, a simple physical injury to the cranium that does not involve the brain is a "wound to the head". As a paramedic, we had to phrase this very carefully so as to paint the correct picture to the receiving physician when we called in a patient report en route to the ED.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What I Did on My Summer Vacation" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
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I have one question...you said the shooter used an M82 on Andrew and Giles. You mean the Barrett M82, correct?

If the bullet that knicked Giles' liver was the one that went through Andrew's back, the bullet would have killed both men; a hit anywhere in the torso from a .50 caliber bullet from an M82 is unavoidably lethal, even if it goes through another person first...it would blow both men in half.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Storm Rising" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Storm Rising" from Harry
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If Glory IS looking to come back and needs Dawn to both open the doorway AND be a new host body, this is not good! Time to figure out just WHERE her cult followers are at, and MAKE THEM TALK! No more Mr. Nice Guy. No, No, NO. Time to let that part of Xander out that has had to deal with all the stuff that his parents dealt him, and let HIM go to work on them, along with Willow. As I said, no more Mr. Nice Guy. Time to go KLINGON on these fools!
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Storm Rising" from semkirk
Review:
Sweet! Another chapter!! Welcome back, glad to see more of this story. Hope this feeds your muse and we can get another chapter soon!

:-)
Review By [semkirk] • Date [29 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Gathering Storm" from LostDragon
Review:
How about a Update, this story is great and needs to be continued!!
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [6 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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