OK. I loved seeing Joyce finally do the witchy nose twitch. Elizabeth Montgomery was one of the first grownup women I ever had a crush on and I thought Joyce was not bad on the 'mature hotness scale' either. I liked your update but am more than a bit confused that Whistler is actually helping Xander out. Unless he is doing it without the Poopheads That Be knowing he is helping Xander out. I need more, I say, more! Thank you for the quick updates and I really look forward to more of your story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Memory Block 2" from crimsonkyuubi
Review:
a short but good chapter. is xander gonna go the extra mile and cut off one finger by "accident"?
Review By [crimsonkyuubi] • Date [19 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Memory Block 2" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Interesting start.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [18 May 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
I like your story more and more. I am still wondering about Joyce. Lol!
Comments from author:
I'm not yet there maybe in Memory Block 3 or an Interlude we'll do more with Joyce. Her witchiness is more of a side plot at this point that needs development.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
This needs adding to, especially if the Assassin and the Templar persist in secret and seek to "court" Xander the way that they seemed to be doing to Altair's descendant in the games..
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Excellent beginning and now I really want to read more. I also liked how you only hit the high points of the Helloween episode. I have two questions. What happened to Willow? And will Joyce really become a Samantha type witch? I hope so. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated