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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from Markelo
Review:
I love Victor Creed's line "I got a neice that says 'boiked'. Yeah, I BEEPED Emma Forst, and I did her mom too."

I even loved Michelle's line about Sabertooth being a manwhore. I always thought Sabertooth was a manwhore myself. And Wolverine's a player. How many girlfriends have that guy had in his life? Hundreds.

Keep it going, Joe!

I really liked Michelle/Cordelia. Xander may have been the buttmonkey but Michelle's going to be the bee's knees.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Alas
Review:
A note about bra sizes:

bras work like so: First you have the band size, which is the size of a woman's ribcage directly below her boobs. To clairify: this is a reflection of how thin she is.

Then you have the cup size. This has to do with large a woman's boobs are. In the case of all of te early seasons, we're talking about extreamly thin women here. Probably 32s.

So if you're saying normal Willow size, she's probably a 32B, not a 34. And a 36 is a size more commonly found in middle age house wives than skinny tennage girls you probably really mean that Michelle is a 32D or so.

For the record, later season Willow and Angel!Cordelia are probably both 34s.
Comments from author:
Actually, it's publicly available on the Internet that Alyson Hannigan is 34B. Many celebrities' measurements are, since dress makers tend to be rather open with the information they receive from clients. She was a fully grown and matured adult when she began work on BtVS, meaning that was her size at that point. Charisma's actually only a 34C, but tends to be padded out fairly well in televised (and modeling) appearances and so I tend to forget and overestimate her.

And for your information, my 22-year old girlfriend is a 36D verging on 36DD, and is neither middle aged nor a housewife. My sister is a 38B and weighs in at around 145-150 pounds. Halle Berry is a 36C. Christina Ricci is a 36C. Jenny McCarthy is a 38D. So I kinda suggest you have a Coke, a smile, and shut the fuck up when it comes to generalizing about things you apparently know less about than you think you do.
Review By [Alas] • Date [15 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from Dorias
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Awesome story!

The change from Xander to Michelle was really good.
Additional to that I like that you don't just give Xander, Willow and Cordi superpowers and then let them go all fury and kill the Judge and so on in like 5 minutes after receiving their powers, or let more people know about it (Cordi).

But I got One question, does Buffy know about the mutant powers?
If she doesn't know about them please don't let them be revealed soon, I suggest you should wait till they know better about them and what Mystique and Wolverine want to say to their children(Willow) or let me call it relative(Xander/Michelle)
Maybe after the visit to the school. (still just suggestions)

with best regards
Dorias
Review By [Dorias] • Date [12 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from Jarvey
Review:
Please more? Allowing this field to fallow is a travesty to the world that allowed it to grow!

...or something :)
Review By [Jarvey] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from Markelo
Review:
Hey, Joe! I got a couple ideas for codenames for Cordelia and Michelle. They are Polaris 2 for Cordy and Polymorph for Michelle. Polymorph means many shapes in Latin. For Willow I feel that Poe is a pretty good codename for her.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from Markelo
Review:
Hey, nice story. Please post another chapter.
Comments from author:
One of these days.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [10 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-One" from Chikageko
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Rushing after cordy? I know Xander is sort of lazy but even with Mystiques limited morphing abilities she could still match capitan america in speed and endurance; just shift her muscles to somthing more suitable. Same with willow, any time she maxes somthing physically she just has to wait a few minutes to heal and possibly have a protien snack to go again and find a new max. Running as fast as a car is somthing Comic Logan trained himself up to...

anyways cool with the new episodes, I haven't been on for a while so it's nice to come back and find more good quality work waiting for me.
Comments from author:
You do realize that Michelle probably doesn't even know she can do that, right? And Willow's just coming into her powers.
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [26 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from Markelo
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Giggity.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [25 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from Markelo
Review:
Nice job at making 'Michelle' different from Willow. Other than your bashing of Buffy this is pretty good.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Except for your penchant for bashing Buffy I really like your writing.

Please update this.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [3 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from Jarvey
Review:
I hope you update this story again soon, it's been far too long!
Review By [Jarvey] • Date [17 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from jaeger
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Don't really have much to say bar the fact that I've found your tale a good read, and that I will keep reading.
Review By [jaeger] • Date [11 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from borgrabbit
Review:
Great! Fantastic! Just found it and love it. Please don't let it die.

Harmony's family tree must have few branches. ☺
Can't wait to see other mutant activity, like with Gwen.

Could Michelle manifest a wooden stake from her palm? Its organic.

Ciao ☺☻
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [3 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from deathgeonous
Review:
First off, really good story here. Next up, I just reread the whole fic because it's been so long and I missed updates and all, and I think I noticed added parts to the first few chapters, Namely the scenes with Mystiqe and Sabertooth and Spiderman and the Blackcat. I was pretty sure before that you'd be bring in Mystiqe, but now I'm almost positve she'll show up soon. BUt I now wonder if the Blackcat will make an aperance as well. Oh well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from Riniko
Review:
Great story! Looking forward to seeing more of this when you have the time to update it. I had been thinking of writing a Buffy Halloween story with Xander somehow becoming Mystique myself, but you beat me to it and did a better job than I would have to boot. Looking forward to reading more of your stories in the future.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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