Interesting story, I've just found it. Hope to see some more chapters soon and don't get discouraged by the negative reviews...like you said..if they don't like it, they should stop reading it...I myself am not a fan of the whey you accentuated their most negative traits...but since it is your story, and you can make it look good per total....just go with it:)
Review By [Blackett] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Not Rated
"LOL" I love it. hoping for more soon. I enjoy how you show Wilow and Xander their places. And can I say stupid Council never growing up and never thinking about the consequences their action have. I child has more sense then the Council, Willow and Xander.
don't wait to long this story is good and fun to read.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Not Rated
I fail to seee reason in this story seeing as Faith and Buffy are the only two slayers in existance and a slayer can easily break out of jail i.e. Faith. And why would the council allow their slayers to rot in jail in the first place?
Comments from author:
Buffy and Faith remained in jail because they felt guilty for what they had done in accidentally killing the deputy mayor. Also it's a known fact that the council don't like Buffy or Faith really cause they refuse to follow their orders. But if you really don't like my story then don't read it. I appreciate your opinion and hope I cleared that up for you.
Review By [KageRyu] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Tried to give it a chance, but found nothing but a giant bash-fic. Definitely a waste of my free time but i guess I should have known by the name of your beta. 1 out of 10 because they don't have negative numbers
Review By [bsams] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Rating [1 out of 10]
chrislover has written a very good story!! One that I wish I could continue to read! Unfortunately, the author has been unable to. A fact that I hope is reversible! I find that Buffy is a Halliwell is intriguing!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [3 Feb 12] • Not Rated
I like your story and evilredknight, Angel did have a child with his Sire Darla a boy named Connor, so dead seed only if the PTB wants to.
and I like the way you write Xander and Willow both are hypocrite. I don't say Buffy is a Saint but those two were awful the last seasons, not nice people.
oh and please update love to read some more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your support. evilredknight was actually my first negative review but I am really thankful that you like my decisions. Yes, Willow and Xander along with Giles and Dawn were hypocritical when it came to Buffy. You're right Buffy wasn't a saint but to me it seemed as if she wasn't allowed to make mistakes but Willow and Xander were. But again thanks for the support, I have the next chapter ready but I'm a little hesitant because I'm blocked for the rest, and have no idea where I'm going with it but i will update as soon as I can.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [31 Jan 11] • Not Rated
This is a little silly. How you've written Xander and Willow is ridiculous, It's just bashing. Heck, ALL the people here as OOC. Buffy has a child with Angel? How does dead sperm get you pregnant?
I really think you should rethink some of your connections and characterizations here. They only work if you turn your brain off.
Comments from author:
Look just because you don't like my story doesn't mean you have to be rude. I'm writing strictly for entertainment and there is nothing forcing you to read this story. I have stated in the story that Buffy and Angel's daughter is a miracle and do to a prophecy. I also believe that i mentioned that my characters would be OOC. I'm sorry that you don't like my story but what you wrote was really inappropriate and I didn't appreciate it. I support your opinion and hope you will enjoy any other stories i post.
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [1 Jan 11] • Not Rated
