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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from bradsan
Review:
Oh I hope Buffy brought the scythe with her It's hers after all. Not Faith, not even any other slayer. It's only hers to wield so Buffy's. Even when she died the second and the third(flat lined) time. The prophecies still are about Buffy. So it is hers.

Glad she leave the Scoobies. They will never grow up and Joyce what was she thinking telling Giles to give it when Buffy was ready. You never be ready to hear such thing it's always a shock. And knowing Giles he will give it when he was ready and not when Buffy will be ready. He should have give before they fought the First and not after. What if Buffy died that time than she would never know about it. No not giving shows how he and the Scoobies wants to control her.

Well I'm done and gone read the sequel. again.
Comments from author:
OK so when she left she did take the scythe with her....I just haven't had a fight scenario yet where she could actually use I but I have been thinking of ways to bring it in I just haven't quite figured that out yet.

And with the whole control issue thing with the Scoobies is another reason why I always saw her leaving that circle because although sometimes they did help her with different things overall they were kind of poisonous to her.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [20 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Wonderful story!! Glad Giles passed on to Buffy the info from Joyce. Though I do not understand why Buffy felt she had to flee with no intentions of being found or going back?
Comments from author:
The reason I set it up that way was because I wanted her to have a fresh start away from te scoobies. Basically away from them because she wasn't quiet over their betrayal. Thanks for the review I also have another series that is similar I this one Buffy is still a charmed one it's call the cousins with the same taste.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [18 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from JediKnight
Review:
Congradulations on one of the worst first chapters I've ever read, you just made the rest of your series not worth considering to me.
Comments from author:
Have you ever heard of the saying "if you don't have anything nice to say don't say anything at all!"
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from divaslayer
Review:
Awesome story, I loved it. Keep up the great work.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Review:
It was pretty good. A Charmed sister who isn't fazed by the life her sisters lead, because she has been doing it way longer... Cool beans, yo!
Comments from author:
LOL...................Thanks glad you liked it.
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [20 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from GypsyDruid
Review:
I like it.
Review By [GypsyDruid] • Date [25 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Awww, okay...seriously hoping for a sequel here. Very enjoyable story.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [25 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Poor Charmed Ones, nothing they do can throw their new sister. Will dead people do it? Sorry, nope. One of *us* is/was evil? Again, nope? D**n it, what will freak Buffy out?!?
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [25 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Iceflame
Review:
Need to add disclaimers, outside of that, looks interesting :).
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [24 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from KnightWulf
Review:
good story, at the end there buffy acting more like her self ya know the slayer but the 2nd chapter she was like scared of the demon she's a slayer for god sakes she shouldn't be scared of him worried ye but not scared. anyway hope to read more soon
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [24 May 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
LOL. The sisters' faces when Buffy just basically yawned at the news of the Source. Strange that she didn't wonder about its possible connection (or other name) to the First Evil. Will that come up next? Look forward to the update! Oh, one other thing...if it's only been nine years, that would only make it 2 years since Sunnydale instead of 4, right?
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [24 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Interesting how you had Buffy bouncing through different fandoms quickly. Wasn't she the slightest bit freaked at Seeley though? Liked how you just changed Paige into Buffy instead of trying to invent a 5th sister.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [24 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
What? No, 'We saved the world, therefore everything is forgiven' attitude for Buffy? Thanks for giving her a way out. Just out of curiosity, where's Dawn?
Comments from author:
I didn't like Dawn so I wrote out as if she disappeared after the whole thing with glory.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [24 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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