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Review of chapter "Rock-a-bye, Baby" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
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I enjoyed this, though I have to say the last few chapters were uneven and the ending was sort of unformed. It would have worked better as the end to a part one of a series than as a true final ending. It felt as if you simply ran out of energy at the end. As a writer, I know how hard endings are, so I'm sympathetic.

I wasn't really sold on the Buffy/Faith with a side of Riley arrangement. I can't see someone as inflexible and jealous as Riley being able to handle a triad relationship, which would be a challenge for most people. Riley and Buffy never worked anyway, why hold onto them? I didn't 'feel' a reason, such as Buffy really liking Riley too much to let him go.

Normally, I don't see Buffy as bi, though Faith is easier to believe and even in canon, you see her potentially being attracted to Buffy and the nature of that attraction *is* ambiguous... but I was willing to suspend disbelief. You portrayed the Faith's feelings in particular in a believable and touching way.

I really like the idea of Faith as Jack's daughter. And their relationship is great.

Peace,

Blue
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [24 Aug 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rock-a-bye, Baby" from StoicLast
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Awesome story! I love that buffy and faith got together and that faith, Tara, and jonathon are friends. I'm looking forward to reading the next one. Just a thought but I always wondered about Dawn being 'the' slayer's blood and if that meant (considering there's two of them) both Buffy and Faith are her 'mothers'.
Review By [StoicLast] • Date [8 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rock-a-bye, Baby" from Morgomir
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Great chapter and ending. Keep up the good work, whatever it may be.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rock-a-bye, Baby" from serenityselena
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interesting ending for this story :)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rock-a-bye, Baby" from bookworm
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Rather a confusing way to end things, but I think I understand the final message of the dream, at least. Some of the earlier parts could use more explanation; it feels like you're seeing this visually and having trouble bringing it across in words, or at least Faith is. It's actually quite good as a disjointed dream sequence, but having that as the last thing we get leaves the reader feeling disjointed too.

Anyhow, I look forward to whatever you choose to work on next. Write on!
Review By [bookworm] • Date [20 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tales of the Stars and the Moon" from raxadian
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Yes, Faith is not that dumb anymore.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [19 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rock-a-bye, Baby" from RankoNakajima
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0_o.......okay? Is anybody else as confused as I am? If this really is the end of this story, I really hope there is a sequel or this story is going to be a major disappointment.
Review By [RankoNakajima] • Date [19 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude B- Stories and Secrets" from raxadian
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Ah yes, wild Oz!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [18 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We now return you to Your Life, already in progres" from raxadian
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It would be fun if OZ ended recruited by the Stargate command at some point. They do so little with the guy in fics...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [18 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So Done With You!" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So Done With You!" from Ember
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I'm really loving this story and can't wait to read more!
Review By [Ember] • Date [13 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So Done With You!" from (Current Donor)ColBlack
Review:
Interesting story. I like the way it shows things continuing in Sunnydale, even with Faith's father in the SGC. Interesting set of pairings possibly coming up with two threesomes. Willow being bi I can definitely believe, and there's always been hints of Buffy/Faith in canon.

Also the enjoining spell, it seems that it linked in Faith as well. What after effects will it have with two slayers involved? Poor Riley though, I'm not sure how well he can cope with competing with Faith for Buffy's attentions, I can definitely see him leaving later. You mentioned doing a Season 5 continuation, I wonder how everyone's memories will be like with Dawn having been around for all this and her take on Faith. And then, of course we have the SGC v Glory possibly coming up - how well would they do against a real god? Jonathan becoming a Scooby is interesting as well, I can see both him and Andrew if got to early enough to becoming forces for good. Looking forward to seeing this continue.
Review By [(Current Donor)ColBlack] • Date [11 Apr 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "So Done With You!" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Yay! You're finishing it! I'm so happy to see this continue. :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So Done With You!" from bookworm
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I just found this story yesterday and have now blown through to the end. Absorbing, plausible, well-written, and just plain fun! I'm glad to hear you have a new chapter planned soon, though I'm somewhat sad it's meant to be the last one. Guess I'll just have to check out your other fics. :-)
Review By [bookworm] • Date [11 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "So Done With You!" from FireWolfe
Review:
Glad to see an update.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [11 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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