I'm sorry...but am I the only reader that is totally confused?! I thought the premise of this story seemed interesting , so I wanted to give it a try. But I am already halfway thru and just can't follow Buffy's character. It's like she's on crack or schizophrenic...her thoughts are bouncing everywhere so much so that it just doesn't make sense to me. Am I missing something here? :)

No, you do get it. I think the Hellmouth or something right before that ... screwed up her powers. If you have scene the show, you know that Buffy had trouble sensing vampires. Now, that she is not on the Hellmouth I think her powers might be coming back. She can sense every rogue vampire in the city. It is driving her crazy.

I think she will be able to get her powers in check very soon. If she does not she will have to leave St. Louis but that is not the direction I want the story to go.

Thanks for reading!

You think there will be a update anytime soon. You aren't abandon this story I hope. will you tell if you are. I won't like but it's better than waiting for something that won't come.

I'm hoping for an update.

I am having problems writing this story but it is updated. If you want to see something different happen in the story please tell me.

I love reviews. Thank you for reading.

i like the idea of this story.
it's early days in, but the way you've written buffy and jason doesn't really ring true for me - which i guess is the whole point of fan fic right :-/
and it'd be awesome if you could shorten some of the words to how people actually talk to eachother in real life "i am/i'm" "you are/you're" etc, would make this a lot easier to read.
but i'm going to persevere because i'm sure this has lots of hits for a reason...and who knows, maybe the further into it you've already done the above.
anyway, kudos on the idea.

Jason seems to have a lot going on in the books. I don't think he would have much time for Buffy if Anita didn't say something to Jean Claude and Richard. He also has his job ... so not much time for Buffy.
I also think that Buffy adapts to her environment. So, far she is experiencing culture shock. She moved from California to St. Louis. Everything is different for her.
Also, the spelling might just be due to my Word editing system. Bad system ... decides not to throw it against the wall ... for now. lol.

I really like Dru she is insane but when she loves you she really loves you. She always loved her daddy even more than Spike strange but true. Harmony will go crazy With Dru so close to her. You can make Harmony a master vampire in this story but Harmony doesn't even know how to behave as a vampire. This is gone be so much fun.

I hope that Buffy takes those watchers down because their insane ways are dangerous to every creature that is living on earth. They really think they are god and can do anything they think is right even when it's inhuman.

Can't wait for your next update. good writing again.

Thank for the review.

Harmony will not be too close to Dru. They will live on separate floors. At least I think that is what I have planned.
With Dru, I am going to have her be close to Buffy.
The Watchers don't show themselves too often so I think Buffy is safe for now.

Dang! How did Dru come over? Cause that is her Dru. Love the surprise.
OK everybody got out, they now have a "master vamp" Harmony, a sick and hurt Dru, Cherry and themselves....WOW
So why is it that after they took Dru into their group that the "glue-like substance" disappeared?

Love, review. Thanks.

I don't think Buffy or any of the other charecters know about this "glue-like substance". But, I will have one of the vampires explain it.

Thanks for the update!
So They got everybody even Cherry, but do they actually get to get out of the building or is this another trap? Does Asher really believe that Buffy and this places' Angel went at it and is he going to ask about it?

I do have one more surprise but they will be out of that building by the next chapter. I am sure Asher will asked Buffy.
I didn't plan for them to stay in that place any longer then they have to stay.

Good review. It made me think that the surprise I have in mind will be more welcome.

Master Vampire Harmony, "Lol". She is so annoying that it makes her cute, Spike will "love" it to see her again, not. This can be fun.

I'm glad that Buffy is showing her inner Slayer who is in charge of her body. I hope her inner Slayer will stop abusing Buffy's body (when Buffy sleeps) in doing things Buffy don't want to.

Hope you will find the time to update soon

I am not sure why Buffy never killed Harmony, so Harmony being a Master Vampire is my answer.

Thanks so much for the review. I love them.

Great story please update soon.

Awesome! I;m so glad you updated:D

So Harm in the picture too now...sounds like hijinks abound. With what we know of harm from Angel, she could very well manage to help those weres and herself to boot. Me thinks Asher may just be a mite upset when they find him that JC keeps trying to get his mitts on Buffy. LOL Although knowing what I do of their past, he might want a Menage Trois! (I think I spelled that right. LOL)

I was going to add Harm earlier but she has not fitting into the story until now. There will be some strange scenes coming up with her in it.
I am not sure what I am going to do with JC.
As for Asher, I want him to be paired with Buffy.

A month? :(
Slayer blood heals faster and makes you warmer huh? JC needs to get his mind outta the gutter and stop trying to seduce her. If he doesn't then the Slayer may take over and kill his behind. Slayer already got loose once so....

Sorry about the long wait.
I don't know how slayer blood tastes but I thought it would be all hot and warm just like coffee for vampires. I think JC would like a sugar with his coffee. lol.
It is hard to see them in the same room let alone both of them trying to save anyone.

Awesome!

Hmm so Buffy managed to overcome the bull? Glad to read that, cause I had started to think that the other half had taken over.
Hopefully nobody gets hurt/killed while they are getting out of there.

I wanted her to overcome her problem earlier in the story but I was having problems doing so. I had another kidnapping planned from the very beginning. This was not it but this is the one with humor. I really had to have a naked Jean Claude in my story somewhere. I love love love reviews.

You know I'm so glad you updated. I got one more thing to say.
Sineya was imbued with the heart, soul and spirit of a powerful demon. What I'm trying to say is this. The slayers that were called are taken from their family's and raised by the watchers. The watchers learned them that all demons were evil. They are raised that way, they didn't know better. Everything was black and white no grey areas.

Buffy wasn't raised by the council and her watchers Merrick and Giles had to learn her that, so it wasn't something natural for her to do. Because of that Buffy could accept the grey area and noticed demons who were not evil. Buffy can sense evil and demon and she protect the innocence. Buffy didn't lose her humanity like Sineya she still cares and love. Sineya is trying to take over Buffy and Buffy is losing her sanity. I like you're story but sometimes I got so confused. Mostly when she loses control and wants to kill everything, that doesn't seems right also because she wants to protect. Darn I hope she will understand sooner then later that something doesn't fit. Because if Buffy loses her sanity then even another slayer will be the enemy and recognized as something she has to kill.

Okay I'm done and waiting for you're next update.

edit: you're welcome.

I am trying to have Buffy's body adjusting to the Anita Blake series. I spent a long time trying to figure out how a slayer would react to a town full of vampires that she is not legally allowed to kill.

Your review did give me some ideas. I do know where the story is going but the ideas help so much. Thank you!

I don't get it. Why do you say that Buffy is not the brain in the Scoobies operations. You forget that Willow and even Giles are very smart, it's Buffy who must think and fight at the same time. You can't do that when you are stupid. You have to be clever to accomplished that, you have to calculated what can go wrong with every move or decision that you'll make.

You also forget that they work together and they all gave their own input and opinion at several maters witch results in a some plan. Most off the times their plan goes wrong or something unexpected shows up and Buffy has to change the plan at stage.
You don't get that her dumb blond act is just an act. Even Xander's behavior as a clown is an act.
What I trying to say is that the brains in the scoobies operations were them together. none off them are stupid and each can think for themselves and discover if something is wrong.

Normally Buffy would already discovered that something isn't right and contacted Giles to talk about it so they could researched. She is a Slayer for how many years, she will know something isn't right and act on it.

There I said it.

Good story by the way and very good writing. Don't wait to long with updating.

Thank you very much for reviewing. I really do love comments. I will try to make Buffy smarter in the chapters that are to come.