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Review of chapter "seven" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "seven" from Kirallie
Review:
Nice to see him finally call Ezra dad.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [8 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "seven" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written 'family' story, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Jun 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "seven" from Mamodo
Review:
Poor Xan!
It's hard to loose people you care for and even harder to loose those you feel responsible for.
Good that he has Ezra and the rest of his group.

Wonder when they will get a little bit more about the facts in the story of the most unbelievable life of one Xander Harris!

~Mamo~
Review By [Mamodo] • Date [8 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "seven" from MistDragon
Review:
Thank you, that was very good. MD.
Review By [MistDragon] • Date [8 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "seven" from DrDamage
Review:
This is a really good series. Writing the most or all of the episode before starting to post it here really helps with continuity and reader involvement so that is highly forethoughtful. Thanks for the work you put into this, I'm looking forward to the next episode.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [8 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "seven" from MavenAlysse
Review:
Wow. I'm really enjoying this series of yours. Wonderfully written, and everyone is still "in character" despite the new addition.

Poor Xander, losing two of his girls - and you just know that - even after the wise words from Vin and Chris - he blames himself for their deaths, regardless that there was nothing he could have done. Maybe a quiet discussion with Josiah would help?

Each time Ezra gets shocked over his feelings for Xander - I just have to grin. Seeing the conman flummoxed is so much fun!

Will Ezra and the others ever get introduced to the supernatural nightlife? Or is it going to remain "classified"?

Thank you so much for sharing and I look forward to your next installment. (all hail the muses and may the ideas flow)

-MavenAlysse
Review By [MavenAlysse] • Date [8 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "seven" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Aww, I liked the ending! This was wonderfully done. You did a great job of showing Xander's former life collide with his present one.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [8 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "seven" from DennSedai
Review:
*eyes up the muses* Uh huh, you guys better behave or the author is going to be in a lot of trouble...which means you'll end up in even bigger trouble...

Or you could cooperate, in which case the loyal and loving readers and fans might send goodies your way ;-)
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [7 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "seven" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Well done....I loved the 'night dad' at the end!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [7 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "seven" from hyssop
Review:
Xander and Ezra needing each other but not wanting to be intrusive or burdensome is really well written and Real. (Yes, capital "R") I am enjoying watching their tentative relationship grow. You always strike such a chord that's great to read. On another note, the phrase, "fidgeting like a bunny on crack" made me laugh out loud. I think I know someone related to JD. :)

hyssop
Review By [hyssop] • Date [7 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "seven" from mokahi
Review:
I've really enjoyed this series and my introduction to the ATF world of the Magnificent Seven via Xander. You've made them both accessible and intriguing. I look forward to your continuation.
Review By [mokahi] • Date [7 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "six" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
I really like the way you're handling the interactions between Xander and Ezra and Vin. Ezra is struggling to offer comfort and Xander is struggling to accept it and Vin is just being the anchor for both. Nothing is going to be a quick fix for any of them and you're showing that very well.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "six" from DennSedai
Review:
Awwwwwwwwww Poor Xander, guilt tripping himself still. Plus if the guys knew the full story, he'd find himself in a very unique situation I expect. Will they ever find out the whole truth? Inquiring minds, can't wait to find out.
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "five" from CronosKitty
Review:
I really enjoyed this series. Im not too well versed on the M7 but you really didnt have to be to read these stories which is of the good. I hope you add more stories to the series. I would like to see more of the developing relationship of Ez and Xander. Great job.
Review By [CronosKitty] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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