Thank you for the update. So the other guy is Sweets? Good descriptions of the others. I love crossovers but if I don't follow the other show sometimes it is confusing. You are doing a great job. More please.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Interesting choice of pairing but I'm eager to see where you take it. I love both characters a lot and really think they would make a hot couple. More please?
I really like your story. I also really like your more mellow and more sane Faith. While I like the Angela/Hodges pairing on the show, I think a Faith/Angela pairing is terrific. Angela is one of my favorite characters on Bones as Faith was on BtVS. I also like the way you didn't make a big deal out of Angel looking like Agent Booth. Some people just look like other people. Lol! I look forward to more of your interesting story, especially if you throw Sweets into your story.
Very cool idea. I can't wait to see where you go with it. Faith's looking at the squints in the bar. At least describe them so the audience knows what she sees.
If you follow Bones you know its Cam, Temperance, Booth, Hodgins and either Sweets or Zack. I miss Zack.
But if you don't follow Bones, visually describing the scene helps.
Great Job.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [29 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]