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Review of chapter "Ring up the Curtain" from DieselDriver
Review:
If these guys are children of Loki then their other siblings include the Fenris Wolf and the Midgard Serpent. Very tough opponents I would think, even for a grown up "Thor" equivalent.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked my story, and Fenris and Midgard are stories, in this universe, based off of the real children of Loki who do look monstrous but aren't quite that big. Well, most of them aren't.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Opening Move" from DieselDriver
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Xander and Cordie sure do have a weird idea of what is supposed to be whispering "sweet nothings" into each other's ears before the foreplay.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Taking the Hint" from DieselDriver
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‘What they don’t know, won’t hurt them.’ Being more of a Xander type than a Buffy type, I would probably have said "What the don't know, won't get them hurt."
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Who's on Top?" from DieselDriver
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So, Cordie bugged out...
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Striving for the Positive" from DieselDriver
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About your author's note: Isn't that what you do in fan fiction? Mix canon and your own material to make a new story? So far you've done pretty darned good. I doubt I'd have made it to chapter 5 if you weren't.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [26 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What's My Line?" from agnar
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*sigh* I just don't get it, how you manage to continually change circumstances, yet everyone STILL does the same as canon.

Spike had to pay for that book, so he 'can't afford a full contract' yet somehow he pays for the SAME 3 fucking assassins as canon! So what the hell was the POINT of that whole 'change' to canon???

Buffy is still the empty headed bimbo wanting desperately to return to being Harmony rather than being a slayer or thor's heir, and she still spends ALL of her fucking time bitching and moaning how she's alone and destined to die and blah blah blah!

Tiresome, boring and utterly fucking pointless, I could just go watch the show if I wanted all the characters to behave EXACTLY the same as canon.

I get that folks outside the 4-some will behave the same as canon, mostly, until they know of the Aesir, but you also have the scoobies, especially buffy and xander, behaving EXACTLY the same as canon, as if they didn't get uber-mystical artifacts that can talk to them and super power ups.

I'm struggling to keep reading this in the hopes you actually take a fucking chance at some point and give the scoobies some actual character growth that wasn't plotted out by Joss in the show. Oh, maybe in season 7 Giles gets his eye poked out instead of Xander since he's Odin's heir, huh? That seems about the extent of the ACTUAL personal growth changes you seem willing to go for.
Review By [agnar] • Date [17 Mar 14] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Striving for the Positive" from agnar
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For fucks sake! You're STILL going to put us through the fucking joke/disaster that is buffy/angel????

What is the fucking point then of the power ups, making them another fucking race if you're still intent on slogging us through canon with them apparently making ALL the same fucking decisions as canon?
Review By [agnar] • Date [16 Mar 14] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Richardthrnnsx
Review:
Great story, recommended.
(Or rather I will recommend this next month when my new month’s rec is available)
On to part 2 
Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Richardthrnnsx] • Date [28 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Opening Move" from Batamut
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How did Oz react fast enough to place his body in front of Willow? I mean if there was only one shot and there wasn't much of a warning? (I take Buffy having no time to react meaning the same as no warning)
Comments from author:
When the assassin drew her firearm, Oz reacted while Buffy was still considering the situation. There was plenty of time for Buffy to act, but in this case, she used that time to come to grips with the situation.
Review By [Batamut] • Date [22 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story, this is an amazing idea for a crossover and I love it.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [12 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eternalfox
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Are you going with the Norse mythology or the Marvel Norse mythology?
Comments from author:
More Norse than Marvel, but I also go with the idea that the mythology didn't get things right because they were passed down from generation to generation by people who had only limited interactions with the Aesir.
Review By [eternalfox] • Date [20 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from deathgeonous
Review:
Hmm, I never finished this. Too bad for me. Well, at least now I have. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
You're welcome.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [24 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Ansku
Review:
Fascinating :)
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Ansku] • Date [4 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from SilverWave
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That was a hell of a story!

Thanks :-)
Comments from author:
You are too kind, thanks.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [8 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What's My Line?" from justapiranha
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I have to admit i was a little fearful to read this story at first, I was worried that it was one of those super power Xander and dumb, bitchy, weak buffy storie lines. But after reading iron buffy decided to give it a shot. And I'm happy i did! I really like storys that keep the characters to cannon, while making them stronger, but not invincible. Keep up the good work and update Iron Buffy soon.
Comments from author:
I don't consider Buffy either dumb, weak, and only occasionally bitchy but everybody is entitled to bitch once in a while. As for Xander, getting superpowers won't suddenly make him turn against his friends because he cares.

As for keeping characters to canon and not invincible, I try though they will diverge more from canon as time progresses.

Thanks for the review and I'll do my best.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [15 May 10] • Not Rated
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