Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

Full of Grace

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of story "Full of Grace" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Hey guys, thanks for reviewing because i really appreciate it ...
But i'm sorry to say that i'm not going to continue with this story beause , me being the stupid girl that i am , cant remember the password to this account !!
I'm EXTREMELY SORRY to someone who was really looking forward to reading this story. But i have good news..
I created another account , and i have a story on this site called quintessence , which is the same plot line as this one but also in my opinion , better .
It has the same prophesy and all , but we dont see the scoobys , AT ALL , so no character death .... For a while....
And to the girl who stated that there were relationships that i made in the second chapter between death , and the dementors from Harry Potter , well yes , there was . I just finished the 5th book and i had to describe how the Death/blackrider thing made valerie feel , and that was the first thing that came to mind....
Read the Harry potter book.. SIMPLY AMAZING!

Sorry again for not continuing with this story because of my stupidity.......
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [5 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Full of Grace" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
back for another review!

I think you SHOULD NOT have a scooby die. that would just be mean and horrible and icky! Well, ok, maybe Anya. She's funny, but really annoying, ya know?

Anyway, i tohught it was cool that they misinterpreted a Wraith for Death. If this wasn't a LOTR?BTVS crossover, the description would bring to mind a dementor from HP.

Good chapter, even if you don't agree. It's a great beginning. Now on to the better stuff, ok?

Please update soon! i await your next chapter!
~ insane blackbeltchic ~
"Some people say I've gone crazy; I had nowhere to go."
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [3 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Full of Grace" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
i love it. The prophecy especially. I think, i hope i know who 'our favorite vampire' is!
Well, on to read the next chater! update soon please!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [3 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Full of Grace" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Thanks to both of you for reviewing . The question of which souled vampire does the prophecy pertain to ? Well that's one question i should be answering soon in the next chapter or so .

And also how do you get a beta reader ? I would really like to improve on my writing skills . Make me a better writer .

This story takes place in season 7 for buffy , and it goes by both the lord of the rings books and movies

Thankyou
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [5 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Full of Grace" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Hi. Nice to read another LOTR/BTVS crossover. I just have a few, er, um...questions? Comments?

I was a bit confused jumping in because I wasn't sure which season you were setting it in. Also, will this be a movie based or a book based crossover?

You're off to a good start; the only question is....will Angel or Spike be the one of whom the prophecy speaks? Hmm....

I vote 'yes' for having one of the Scoobies die. Well, ok, maybe just a Potential. I'm kinda attached to the rest of them. :) {Authoress can be seen crossing fingers and saying, "I hope it's Kennedy, I hope it's Kennedy...!}
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [4 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Full of Grace" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
You have an interesting premise for a story, and I'd like to read more of it, but you really need to find someone to help you with punctuation and capitalization issues. I have a hard time reading something when I find myself concentrating more on the underlying bits that need to be fixed than I am on the story itself.

I hope you can find a good beta reader, because I really would like to continue reading.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [4 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking