Review of chapter "Chapter Two - What Happens In" from TheElegantFaerie
Ooh Jackie as the Slayer?! I like, I like! I really hope you have a Jackie/Hyde reconciliation/and pairing in this story! That would make me really happy! Oh, and I hope your planning on continuing this, I saw that the last time you updated was in '09....
Please update soon! :D
Review By [TheElegantFaerie
] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two - What Happens In" from Arekanderu
I am loving this story. The idea of Jackie as a Slayer is great. I can't wait to see more
Review By [Arekanderu
] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Nightmare in Chicago" from MiffyD
Great story! Jackie's really in character, she WOULD so hate public transportation. I wonder how Steven and hers relationship progress throughout the story. I wonder what Jackie's relationship with her watcher will be too, along with her reaction about being the slayer.
She will be an awesome slayer, great job on the story!
Review By [MiffyD
] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - Nightmare in Chicago" from angeluscado
It's definitely an interesting start; I don't think I've read a "That 70's Show" crossover, and now I'm glad I did.
Looking forward to more, good job so far.
Review By [angeluscado
] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue - Ghosts On My Back" from MiffyD
Great story idea, it looks like it's already a good story just from the chapter! It has a lot of potential, even though I don't like the word potential, I like to think this story is already good.
I wonder if Jackie is still alive and if she's going to be together with anyone?
Review By [MiffyD
] • Date [1 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue - Ghosts On My Back" from Shieldage
Cool. I like your choice of years. Good potential.
Heh, depending on the tone and level of coincidences you want for your story, you could always check out my Challenge 1652: That 70s Vampire
Review By [Shieldage
] • Date [31 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue - Ghosts On My Back" from ChaoticTempest
Wow neat! grate start, keep it up, I would like to see where this is going
Review By [ChaoticTempest
] • Date [31 May 09] • Not Rated