Fun story. Side note - Did you know that the first thing that Stan and Ollie worked on was a silent version of 'The Wizard of Oz'? Stan was the Scarecrow and Ollie was the Tin Woodsman. Useless trivia fact.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [9 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
What a terrific ending to a lovely story. Poor Wes. Wonderful Wes. It is not every character in a story who gets to travel from being a complete dork to dieing a magnificent hero over the arc of his story. I love your Faith and Xander and look forward to more of your stories.
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Love Faith's talent for tall tales (and classic old comedy routines), as well as the fits she's giving Xander while he's trying not to spill the beans by laughing out loud.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [3 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Ahhh the ghosts of Laurel and Hardy! still pushing that darned piano up the steps just to have it roll back down, over and over. That is my definition of Hell! Faith must really look interesting to our poor naive clowns. At least they are polite, and it's nice to see that she is just as polite to them.
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [3 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Excellent beginning. I really like your "What happens in Vegas" story, and this does a neat job of filling in what life was like at Cleveland house during that time. I really feel like you've got Xander and Faith dead on in your characterizations and the way you portray the younger slayers is very well done. I look forward to more of this story as well as any of your other work.
Review By [poe] • Date [1 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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