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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from JJDudeman
Review:
Such a worthy TV show. Having Dawn's language skills tie in to the Lightman Group's field is brilliant. I'd LOVE to see a lot more of this. Not as sure about having Dawn so traumatized so soon, but the really intriguing hook you have here you brought up from the start - Dawn's necessary cover-up lies mixing with her strange truths would make her largely indecipherable. It is a bit tougher to figure out just how much the Lie to Me crew should EVER figure out. Someone logically concluding some or all of the unbelievable truth just by reading Dawn? Then would THAT person's lies complicate things? Or how much of that would get in the way of a good Lie to Me story being told? Which aspect should the plot focus on? A lot of potential I wish you or someone else would explore well, because I'm not capable! Ah well.
Review By [JJDudeman] • Date [28 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from HebiR
Review:
Pleased to see more.
Review By [HebiR] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from athenethegoddess
Review:
YAY YOU POSTED MORE!!!

Athene
Review By [athenethegoddess] • Date [9 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from spk
Review:
Ecstatic to see this update. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [1 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Tjack
Review:
Nice to see a wrap-up on this one. What made you decide to go back to this?
Review By [Tjack] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Jazzibear
Review:
Totally brilliant! Superb story-telling, and impeccable craftsmanship.

I long for more when the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune permit and you feel so inclined.

I suppose Dr Foster doesn’t come from Gloucester?


Edit: I am embarrassed: I have done some checking, and the Doctor Foster I was thinking of went to Gloucester (not came from) and had an unfortunate accident – so no connection at all.
Comments from author:
I just assumed you were having some fun :) so don't be embarrassed! Thanks for the review, glad you liked it! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Katt
Review:
Wooot so glad you're back and I hope real life is going good for you.

Excellent update, I love this story as I do all of yours, there are not nearly enough Lie to me crosses done, I was sad when they discontinued it I loved that show. Hope you feel like updating more frequently, any of your stories really they all rock =)

Katt
Review By [Katt] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Rhyssia
Review:
Yaaaaaay. :)
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Yay! You're back to this! I'm very glad, and it's nice to see Lightman in his sneaky-caretaker role with poor, sick Dawn.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from bookalicious
Review:
Glad you're back. I love unexpected crosses that are more mundane than the whole 'See Demon, Kill Demon' when they're written properly. Plus I love your story for leaving out the whole 'let's dump the whole cast in this reality and add demons' thing. You're greatly talented, and I can't wait for more.
Review By [bookalicious] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from moonstarsfu
Review:
Yay!! I'm so happy to see you updated this. I'm enjoying the parental-like relationship developing between Dawn and Gillian and Cal. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Bunney
Review:
Love it :) I've missed you :) hugs :)
Review By [Bunney] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from slmncpm
Review:
yay for a new update! i am sad that spike had to leave her, but that bracelet is brilliant! more soon please?
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Addlcove
Review:
was wondering if there is any plans to continue this? I have enjoyed reading it several times already but I am wanting more.
Comments from author:
continued! sorry for the long wait, RL is so busy!
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [15 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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