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Review of chapter "The day after" from Neverwillmini
Review:
I've never really followed Kyle XY, just seen a couple episodes, but his is interesting and I definitely watch for more. In regards to the age question, if Xander started school when he was 4, then yes he could graduate at 17 (I did). It all depends on what the birthday 'cut off' is for the school district/state you're in. The question came up on a group and I believe we discovered California's cutoff was in December, so you're premise is fine.
Comments from author:
Thanks! That is super helpful, 'cause I really wanted to make sure that Xander wasn't being a super creep. Although, it'll still take time before anything happens (i.e., Kyle needs to grow up a little).
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [15 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The day after" from kayron
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It's going to be a major help to them that Kyle learns so fast, but Xander is going to need to teach Kyle about human interaction and culture too, because dry academic knowledge alone isn't going to be enough for Kyle to get by. I can't wait to see how Willow reacts to learning the details about Kyle.
Comments from author:
It'll definitely be interesting to see how Kyle deals with other people if Xander is the one in charge of socializing him...I think I may be a little frightened!
Review By [kayron] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander, meet Kyle" from Jess
Review:
I love this story so far and hope that you continue it.
Comments from author:
I swear I will not leave this story unfinished. I've just been occupied with writing my thesis (which seems to be a never ending ordeal).
Review By [Jess] • Date [5 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander, meet Kyle" from nukeswolf
Review:
Will there be more of this story soon? I hope so =)
Comments from author:
Um...I hope there will be. I'm really blocked right now and almost at a complete loss as to where to take the story.

Also, because I'm writing my thesis right now, most of my writing energy has been going there. It has been on my mind, this story, hopefully I'll crack my block and get something posted soon.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [nukeswolf] • Date [14 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander, meet Kyle" from Darkhime
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Ooo I can't wait for more,the fic is really good!!!
Review By [Darkhime] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander, meet Kyle" from theweirdchick
Review:
Wonderful beginning. You've written Kyles thoughts very well. I really hope you continue this. Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
I will continue, I promise. I will not be a person who abandons a story, its just that all of my energy for writing has been going towards my thesis and various academic work.
Review By [theweirdchick] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander, meet Kyle" from MistressTitania
Review:
You've got Kyle's voice down so wonderfully! I was very excited to see this slashy type crossover. I am eagerly waiting for more.
Review By [MistressTitania] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander, meet Kyle" from AonGealach
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I love how you have Xander wanting to better himself and not just giving up. He really is being very sweet to Kyle and without making it a pervy. I am really excited about this story so far and I look forward to the next installment!
Comments from author:
I'm definitely doing my best to avoid the pervy.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander, meet Kyle" from kayron
Review:
I havn't read very many Kyle XY stories before, and never a crossover. It seems that Kyle and Xander will be raising each other a bit. By taking on the responsibility of helping Kyle, Xander will become more mature. With Xander, Kyle will learn about what it means to be human. Helping Kyle will put Xander in an Initiative-like situation. Xander and Kyle will have to deal with a secret organization, doing experimentation on sentient beings, and willing to kill anyone who gets in their way. I enjoyed the t.v. show. I like the idea that Xander is the one who will help Kyle. Based on the show and the first chapter, I'll be tracking this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I also enjoyed the show a great deal, but noticed there isn't a great deal of fanfic for it.

I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Review By [kayron] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander, meet Kyle" from shdwslayer
Review:
This is a great beginning! You said Kyle's thoughts were supposed to be in italics but they're not, you might want to fix that. Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Oh, thanks for that. I didn't even notice.
Review By [shdwslayer] • Date [4 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander, meet Kyle" from nukeswolf
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I am liking this so far, it's great =) Keep Going =)
Review By [nukeswolf] • Date [4 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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