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Review of chapter "The Weird Journey from Giles’ Office to Japan" from ConDaMon
Review:
i hope you come back to this fic it definitely has potential
Review By [ConDaMon] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Weird Journey from Giles’ Office to Japan" from darkblade
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*Pokes fic again*

Is there hope or all is lost and fic is dead?
Review By [darkblade] • Date [21 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Weird Journey from Giles’ Office to Japan" from GundumM
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looks like it could end up really good
Review By [GundumM] • Date [4 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Weird Journey from Giles’ Office to Japan" from darkblade
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*Being very sad goblin* Moooore?
Review By [darkblade] • Date [9 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Weird Journey from Giles’ Office to Japan" from darkblade
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In 3 days before my birthday (and Akamatsu one btw) can i hope for MORE? Rare case when i whine for continuation btw...
Review By [darkblade] • Date [2 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Weird Journey from Giles’ Office to Japan" from JediKnight
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Interesting job with the story so far, please do your best to add more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [20 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lost and Found: A Missing Report" from darkblade
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Vld wrote:
>Hell, even if she's no Slayer, Motoko is a demon-hunter in her own right.

She is Shinmei-ryuu... She is certainly not Eishun or Tsuruko, but if she is on Setsuna or Touko level - slayers got nothing on her ^_^ Then there is Naru's stepsister Mei...
Review By [darkblade] • Date [15 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Weird Journey from Giles’ Office to Japan" from Vld
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Keitaro is perfect for the job. He is good at archeology stuff, despite his lackings in lots of other subjects (hint: women), and he's nearly invulnerable (i mean, surviving Motoko's attacks, Naru's, Kaola Su's and Sarah's? Yeah, invulnerable!)

Besides, out of all the girls he knows, at least four are Slayer-materials... possibly at least one of them being one? Hell, even if she's no Slayer, Motoko is a demon-hunter in her own right.
Review By [Vld] • Date [15 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Weird Journey from Giles’ Office to Japan" from darkblade
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Thing is - as i remember character notes Tama is Genbu representation... With other 3 also present.
Review By [darkblade] • Date [11 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Weird Journey from Giles’ Office to Japan" from darkblade
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Random thought of the day 1:

Heh... I just can't wait to see Xander's reaction on Elder Demon God in from of small cute flying turtle...

Random thought of the day 2:

Given that McDowell and McDougal are SAME family name with language shift due time... Sarah as Eva's great-great-...-great aunt... OUCH! I want to see they clansmen interaction...

Random thought of the day 3:

MolMol is definitely pocket dimension... and i'm so not sure Kaolla is pureblood human... And given Xanders luck with women... and Red Moon... LOL.
Comments from author:
um tama not an eldergood but plans are there for Xander Tama interactions...
Review By [darkblade] • Date [10 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Weird Journey from Giles’ Office to Japan" from Bobboky
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short but sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Weird Journey from Giles’ Office to Japan" from ColdFuzzions
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I laughed.

Xander has what for equipment an back-up? Sure he can spot things, but a Slayer with him could help, both to give him credit, an mis-understandings.

What crossovers will there be besides Love Hina, Ranma 1/2, Sailor Moon?

Thanks for writing.
Comments from author:
No. No. NO! Sailor Moon is not going to be anywhere near this... one other cross but no spoilers yet that is for later

He has two more pieces of equipment oneshot emergancy teleport and a small shiled thingie.

A slayer or two may turn up later
Review By [ColdFuzzions] • Date [10 Jun 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Weird Journey from Giles’ Office to Japan" from Hecatonchires
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I'm liking the idea. Anyone planning to introduce the slayers to Love Hina and Ranma should be congratulated. However, I think the fic is reading more like a summary than a proper fic. To much tell, not enough show.

eg:
"Ah, I almost forgot" said Giles, reaching into his jacket's breast pocket and removing a small item. "This is for you Xander. It is the latest from Willow and Andrew's lab. They call it a babelstone. Apparently it will help you with the language when you get to Japan. This one apparently won't turn you purple, but you should keep it away from cats and pickles."
"Ahhhh, thanks G-Man" said Xander, taking the small stone. It looked like malachite, with several runes etched into the surface and inlaid with copper. A leather thong was tied around it in a complicated way, allowing him to wear it around his neck.
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [9 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Weird Journey from Giles’ Office to Japan" from darkblade
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Ehm... They are in USA or England? "Texan broker" and "Brits would learn" do not compute together...

>Oh and there was some random guy with a map and weird clothes looking lost. He went ballistic at Xander when he tripped and almost spilt his water bottle over the man.

Bwuhahahahahahhahahahhahahahha.... Btw i think that Haruna is either Ranma and Nabiki daughter or Ranma and Akane daughter but spent most of the time with Nabiki. Personality fits at least - "Nabiki 2.0, all bugs patched". But you are going "the same time" route and it's sad :(

>-Defiantly no more cheese before sleeping-

Definitely, not defiantly... also bwuhahahahahahhahahahhahahahha!

PS. It's all good but you are really, really need to make bigger chapters. There is two common "filters" for not reading bad fanfiction and they are "if average chapter less then 1k words it's not worth reading" and "if average chapter less then 2k words it's not worth reading". TTH is not FF.NET but i think there is still many people who use it here.
Comments from author:
well there are people from all over the world working in London I was thinking an american got fired from the city and went on a dunken rampage hence driving on the wrond side of the road...

chapter 2 was aprox double the size of chapter 1 will try for an increase again in chapter 3 it was just this chapter was conentraiting on Xander and that was a natural break next chapter we start getting into the meat of the story will try for 2000 words but no promises
Review By [darkblade] • Date [9 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lost and Found: A Missing Report" from darkblade
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Cameos as in "it's the same universe after all" or just cameos? Timeline wise it's either late 2003 or early 2004 i think (am i wrong?) and most of Negima people are in MW anyway and can't participate. But other things are important like Japan magical societies reaction on action or how really powerful Shinmei-ryuu is... Plus Negima and Love Hina are really add flesh and blood to each other universe-wise.
Comments from author:
it's the same universe after all... kinda... same characters different universe if that makes sense.

timelines are going to be way wrong it will be early LH after collapse of SD also other serise are going to be slightly out if I want to get all the right charechters together.
Review By [darkblade] • Date [7 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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