I'm glad you liked it; it was fun writing it with Batman's POV, especially considering how he'd see the interactions between Spike and Xander. Thanks for the review!
~Alice~
Review By [MistDragon] • Date [13 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Vinnie, my friend, I don't think the following can be catergorised as only a 'teenishy reference to blow-jobs'... "Shagging? Buggering? Fucking? Blow-jobs?" Spike offered. :)
However! You have a big repeating typo in the story - and OK the first line made me laugh out loud, but... Batman is the DARK KNIGHT not the DARK NIGHT. :(
Aside from this, please keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
D'oh! Thanks for spotting that! I fixed it.
Yeah, it's teenyish. It's mentioned once, and there isn't any actually blowjobbing (which I don't think is a word, but whatever) and shagging.
Thanks for heads up and feedback.
~Alice~
Review By [sistercity] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]