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Review of chapter "Chapter 10: "Rewired and Reloaded"" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: "Rewired and Reloaded"" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
I don’t know enough about Naruto to offer an opinion on your portrayal of him, but your other characters certainly seem to be interesting new takes on the heroes in question, and so far your plots seem interesting (I don’t get why you had a gender-switch for the ‘Web of Shadows’ Symbiote Victory scenario, but otherwise this story continues to appear promising).
Comments from author:
1- Thanks for the Review

2- You mean Sasuke Naruto does not appear in the story
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8: "Secrets Held Aflame"" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [21 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7: “On the Count of Zero”" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [7 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6: “Falling Inside the Black" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: “The City of Hard Knocks" from Morgomir
Review:
Great story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: “The City of Hard Knocks" from Kaleidofox
Review:
Ok, I love the idea and the story...it just seems like you move a bit fast, like the beginning. It just seems like if given the chance you would have written more to explain what was going on throughout the story. I understand that. I have a tendancy to to only put up the basic stuff of my stories, telling my self I will go back and put in all the other stuff once I get the story up (I do this so I don't forget where am going with the story) but never get to it.

But other than that, I actually think it is a really original and well written story.
And man the Kitty with rogue attributes is really weirding me out, but considering both of their powers, I can only imagine that what you have written would occur. It really does make a lot of sense...

I also like how you kept general outfit idea of Rogue but changed the color.
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: “The City of Hard Knocks" from nemogbr
Review:
Great way to change the Exiles.

Perhaps you can find a way to give some assistance to Melaka Fray in the future?
She needs a Watcher.

Awaiting the changes in New York.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: “Flipside of the World’s Coin”" from RubyPaladin
Review:
Stupid question but can Tommy summon the Dragon Zord?
Comments from author:
the truth I have not yet decided if he can or not But imagine that Tommy tried to use the Dragon Zord against enemies, Like Superman'in the first mission that poor Zord will not Have a chance in hell
Review By [RubyPaladin] • Date [16 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: “Rising Dragons, Fallen Heroes”" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
And that's the fixing of Kingdom Come, out of the way.

Iris West as the Flash, eh? She'll certainly make things interesting.

From the way Buffy commented on love, I get the feeling she reviewed her own and her alternates' lives in between reading binges..
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Flash in the Pan" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Joker's death started the Last world war?

Even if they fix this tomorrow, that SOB is laughing in Hell. Count on it.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
This makes great sense, actually.

In dying the way she did, this Buffy essentially took Dawn's place as Key. That which transcends space also trenscends time, after all.

And with Exiles like these, it's gonna be interesting. Especially if the Powers think to butt in..
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Bite into the Rotten Apple" from Nightscream
Review:
oh okay! Now I understand! :)

There all characters that we know and love BUT from differ ant parallel timelines! gotcha!
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [8 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Nightscream
Review:
seems interesting...but one issue, Kitty Pryde isn't Rogue's real name. Rogue's real name is Marie.

Kitty Pryde went by the name Shadowcat.

idk if this was an honest mistake or if its a plot twist for latter. :)
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [8 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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