Review of chapter "Prologue" from fourmenandanelephant
Buffy is acting more like an adult than Joyce or any of these fools in the Justice League or among the guardians of Oa a twelve year old being drafted into a intergalactic police force that actually has no real authority other than it's sheer might which it uses to enforce it's will is absurd... I can see Buffy dying in this universe and coming back as the Specter or a White Lantern to beat them down hard... I can see why most of your stories and series have never been finished you write yourself into a corner with over complicated far fetched and illogical story lines try something simple like the only Clifford story on the site I think you will do a bit better...
Review By [fourmenandanelephant
] • Date [4 Aug 14] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from possom
Are you going to continue this?
Review By [possom
] • Date [6 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from JediKnight
Very interesting job on the story so far, I'll look forward to more.
-Will Buffy and Dawn ever reconcile?
Review By [JediKnight
] • Date [4 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from AlexiDrake
Read the entire series in a day, more please. Please keep the muse Fed!
Review By [AlexiDrake
] • Date [30 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from MarcusSLazarus
So, we've got Jenny in the Indigo tribe, Angel missing presumed dusted, Dawn passing her GL training with flying colours, Xander 'infested' by the Star Sapphire's answer to Ion and Parallax, and that mysterious figure at the end?
This is DEFINITELY showing potential...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus
] • Date [20 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from LFW
Read all and I wonder why Mongul did not press his attack after defeating Xander; even with all of his troops dead he is still powerful?
And I am impressed with the story so far and drafting Xander is one thing, lets see how that control lasts is Dawn is in front of him.
Review By [LFW
] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from TweedWizz
"“Now, time to introduce the Slayer to the Corpse.” He said before flying deeper into space."
Heh. That's a five second fight if I ever saw one. Talk about out-gunned.
I really enjoyed Enyos' come-uppance, as opposed to your Angel chapters in the earlier story. What sort of idiots create a curse with a happiness clause?
Comments from author:
Personally, I feel the same way about the curse. Seems to me they should have proofread it a bit before using it.
Review By [TweedWizz
] • Date [10 Jun 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]