So, we've got Jenny in the Indigo tribe, Angel missing presumed dusted, Dawn passing her GL training with flying colours, Xander 'infested' by the Star Sapphire's answer to Ion and Parallax, and that mysterious figure at the end?
This is DEFINITELY showing potential...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [20 May 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Read all and I wonder why Mongul did not press his attack after defeating Xander; even with all of his troops dead he is still powerful? And I am impressed with the story so far and drafting Xander is one thing, lets see how that control lasts is Dawn is in front of him. Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
"“Now, time to introduce the Slayer to the Corpse.” He said before flying deeper into space."
Heh. That's a five second fight if I ever saw one. Talk about out-gunned.
I really enjoyed Enyos' come-uppance, as opposed to your Angel chapters in the earlier story. What sort of idiots create a curse with a happiness clause?
Comments from author:
Personally, I feel the same way about the curse. Seems to me they should have proofread it a bit before using it.
Review By [TweedWizz] • Date [10 Jun 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
