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A Walk in the Park

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Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Genuka
Review:
pity you didn't follow through with this.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from PATM
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Extreme vagueness here for sure, so they wake up in the park years after the movies but I need more in the first chapter
than just a headache and the smell of loam(?) and road surface. I await more story.
Review By [PATM] • Date [12 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from ReallyBored
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Wow! Keelin sounds even nastier then Kennedy at her worse! What are you planning to do to her? Have her stepped on? Or drop her in dino poo? Just want to know, 'cause at this stage of things she's not really likeable!
Review By [ReallyBored] • Date [12 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from zafaran
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Assuming the "Boss" is Xander, we've got a Xander-trained Slayer guarding Dawn. Even without the mystical upgrade, that means Dawn is accompanied by a Slayer that's trained in normal-human fighting skills, which is all to the good since it seems like the Slayer modifications are off-line for the duration of the visit. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [11 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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