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Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from spk
Review:
Would love more of this sometime. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from bradsan
Review:
Read it again and the story is getting better every time I read it.
Still waiting for a update, hope it will be soon. Can't wait for the pairings.

See ya
Review By [bradsan] • Date [15 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from Toniboo
Review:
hey i really like this story, i hope you cotninue with it

toniboo
xox
Comments from author:
I will, but I have two chapters that I have to write for the next posting, the TOO update and the background story for Mac.
Review By [Toniboo] • Date [8 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from bradsan
Review:
euhm Mac from MacGyver. He is cute. I even like the older version on Stargate,
Couldn't find a side story yet so I'm guessing.
Comments from author:
Haven't written the side story yet, so no worries about missing it. I'll turn the story into a series when I post the side story...I promise.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [21 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from bradsan
Review:
I though that you said that nothing could be chanced after Buffy's time in hell. Now you telling Amy went down to the master liar together with Angel and Xander to rescue Buffy. Did I miss something. You know what I'm gone read it again from the beginning till the end.

And who is Mac again I missed something am I right.

I would love the pairing Joyce/Giles and Faith or Amy/Oz and please don't forget a hunk for Cordy if Buffy is gone stick with Mac whoever he is. I hope he is cute.

Love the story and can't wait till the next update. Now I'm gone start reading the story again, because I still think I missed something.

edit: Way better. Still hoping for Joyce/Giles because I think that Buffy deserves a mom and a dad and she consider Giles already as her dad. I will still read it again, I always do with stories I really like.
Comments from author:
I guess I didn't explain it right. She couldn't change the fact that Buffy was friends with Xander and Willow before her trip into hell. The most she could do was add a friend who Buffy knew and 'deserved' at the time. Does that explain it better?

There are plans for Giles' romance, but I'll have to think about the rest of the gang.

EDIT: Mac will be explained in an upcoming chapter & side story.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from spk
Review:
Very interesting twist with Wishverse. Can't wait to see the changes it may bring. :)
Comments from author:
It may get confusing, but hopefully the next chapter or two will clear up any questions.
Review By [spk] • Date [8 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
Mac who? I am a little lost after the wish thing. but I am looking forward to Buffy having some awesome friends from that wish. I take it Cordy was still with Xander and Oz was still with Willow but are broken up now? Is Oz one of Buffy's friends? I like Oz in most of your stories. does Anya end up stuck as a human somehow? ok so lots of questions and wondering if there will be more between Buffy and Giles romantically or if this Mac person will be a new romantic interest for her. looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Don't worry, this chapter was supposed to be confusing. Mac is a never mentioned before character that we'll learn more about in the next chapter and side story. I don't think Anyanka will become human since there is no reason to reverse the wish. (As far as anyone knows, the other world could be worse.) I may try to answer the Cordy/Oz issues in Mac's side story. You'll have to wait and see about Buffy and Giles' love lives.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from Cutiepie
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I am going to ramble a bit here.

I don't know what you have planned, but I want to see Xander and Willow's reaction to the change from the Wish. It seems (from canon) that while nobody else realizes there is a difference, the "wisher" remembers the before world and I can picture at least Willow wanting to get back with Buffy's group. Not being part of the slaying group would end (or at least seriously curtail) her access to the magick texts, which I am sure would be upsetting to Willow even if she doesn't miss being Buffy's friend.

Obviously, there was *some* changes that could be made to the time prior to Buffy's hell-visit since Amy is now the one responsible for Buffy surviving the Master. I bet that really chafes Xander, since he seemed to consider that a major claim to fame, and now it isn't his anymore. Will you explain any further why Amy was with Xander and Angel, or just leave it as it is? Were there any other changes before "hell", or was this pretty much the only one?

Plus, I'd like to see just how the wish made the group split. Was there still cheating that caused Cordy to break up with Xander? Is Oz still with Willow, or still with Buffy's group? Will they still refer to themselves as "Scoobies" or is that going by the wayside as well? Is Faith going to have new/additional friends? Is she going to be more integrated with Buffy's group? Personally, I would love to see Oz and Faith paired up (since you already said in response to another review that he won't be paired up with Buffy). If he is single, that would be a possible option to the Sisterhood of Jhe incident, since Xander likely won't be involved, and I don't see Faith tossing Oz out in his underwear either. I've believed for a long time that Oz and either slayer would be a good match since he wouldn't be intimidated by her strength (ie. Riley) but would still be strong enough to be a mate for her.

So many questions! I don't expect you to answer them here (especially if you will be integrating the answers in the story) but wanted you to know that at least *someone* was asking them.

Edited to add: Oops, I forgot that Oz was wolfy the night of Jhe. Still would like for him to hook up with Faith on a permanent sort of basis.
Comments from author:
I think Willow will remember, but not sure about Xander. Maybe Willow will tell him though.

Amy's inclusion into the group is pretty much the big change. The other one is Mac becoming friends with Buffy just before she came back from LA.

I'll think about showing the group split in the side story introducing Mac. That seems like a good place to show it.

Unfortunately, Oz can't have sex with Faith the night of the Jhe thing; he was a werewolf that night.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from BrownFinderth
Review:
A most intriguing story!! Yet, Anyanka makes her appearance in ch 10! These wishes can cause me trouble sometimes. Still, I'll continue reading this tale!!!
Comments from author:
Well, at least she came in like she did in canon; she just found a different 'scorned' woman to manipulate.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Buffy gets the friends she deserves? Hurray for unwittingly generous wishes!
Comments from author:
I know, right? Thank goodness for people who think too highly of themselves.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from clarityfades
Review:
Willow & Xander will never learn, will they? LOL Love that you still incorporated Anya into the story...& I love Amy being a part of the crew. So...will Giles still destroy Anya's power center? Or will this be the 'new' world they all live in? I do hope it's reset but that Buffy cuts Xander & Willow out of her life--especially Xander. Although Willow's willingness to believe the worst in Buffy has me not wanting her around either. Also, I ADORED Buffy's threat to Faith's new Watcher & guardian. & I liked that they appreciated her concern for Faith. Hopefully, Oz & Cordy can become closer to Buffy--after all, you know how I love Buffy/Oz in any incarnation. LOL & I'm looking forward to seeing the side story involving Max. Absolutely fantastic chappie!
Comments from author:
Figured Anyanka would have been drawn to Sunnydale by Cordy's anger, but after Buffy took her side, the call would reduce and Anyanka would be left with nothing to do until she overhear the dorky duo.

Pretty much from here on out is the wishverse; I have no plans at this time for reversing it.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [29 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from Valkyrie
Review:
Are they going to undo the wish they made? I like the idea of the wish, but the fact that you don't show them understanding the consequences of it, that you cut off sort of in the middle of the wishverse, makes it feel like the chapter is incomplete.
Comments from author:
No plans to reverse the wish; it is now the new canon for the story. As far as this story is concerned, the scenes without Willow and Xander still happen like I wrote previously; the ones with them are altered depending on how far after the party they occured. Fortunately, I don't think I had too many scenes where they were important to the overall chapter.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from Toniboo
Review:
ummmm hus mac? is he an oc? or from another show cos the only mac i know is mac taylor from csiny. anyways still loving the fic!!!!

toniboo
xox
Comments from author:
He's from another show, but not CSI:NY. I'm hoping somebody can figure it out.
Review By [Toniboo] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from vampygal
Review:
Yeah! An update! Good chapter, I figured I'd better go back and read all of it first though since it's been awhile :)
Comments from author:
Now it will confuse you since you'll be wondering how those chapter would go without Willow and Xander around. *grin*
Review By [vampygal] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: The Wish" from andiesimmo
Review:
yeah! updates gimme gimme gimme more please PLEASE thanks:)
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [andiesimmo] • Date [28 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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