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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LeaFairy
Completely incredible story, I am so glad that I found it!!! I seriously love the idea of one of the junior slayers "wishing" Dawn away and I'm intrigued by Dawn's connection with the portals/anomolies. Very cool that she can sense them and helpful too =)

I also love that Dawn saved Stephen (duh!) and that they both eventually got back to the right time... well Stephen's time at least :-) I thought it was lovely as well how Dawn and Stephen developed such a strong bond through their journey together and how natural it felt when they got together at the end. (I simply adored his marriage proposal by the way...)

Anyway, this whole fic was pretty damn amazing (and original too) and I just loved it to pieces! Thank you so much for writing this!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [30 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from moonstarsfu
This is so awesome, I'm only sorry I didn't read it sooner. I am now in love with the idea of Dawn/Stephen.
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [11 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Liked this a lot - another vote for a Dawn versus Helen sequel, especially since Helen will surely come nosing after Stephen when she learns he's still alive.

And people will REALLY want to know how Dawn detects anomolies...
Comments from author:
I'm actually working on a 'feature length' fic about this, kind of. Takes a little bit of a different spin than the one-shot and I'm still trying to hash out how it is that she detects the anomalies. I hate just saying 'because the key.' There's always the possibility that she is the cause of the anomalies do to the key being forced into a single dimension and form and then forced to create a rip in space and time for her to get to another dimension, causing cosmic earthquakes that are anomalies because there simply isn't enough space in one dimension for a constant such as the key. I dunno.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ArjaiH
I loved it. I also like where you ended it before Helen's return and Cutter's death. Maybe a sequel in which Stephan and Dawn save Cutter and the Arc from Helen, oh, damn the ARC at least they save Cutter! Good-O!
Comments from author:
I am intrigued, there could be a possibility of that happening, especially as I see Dawn decking Helen. I mean, the future was done in Cutters name, doesn't mean he was the one that did it. Maybe Helen starts the change by killing him and making everyone work to stop her. Sorry, jumbled thoughts that have been plaguing me.
- D
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [17 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Your time-line is a little off; Claudia was replaced by Jenny at the end of Series One, and the change in the Permian that caused Claudia to never have existed also mysteriously stripped Lester of the knighthood that you have him still possessing. Is your use of Claudia deliberate and, if so, why? Jenny turned out to be more use to the team than Claudia had been, although she wasn't as nice a person at first.

I like the story anyway.
Comments from author:
Sadly, I just finished watching the first two seasons (again) and still missed that I had Claudia instead of Jenny in there, as fro the knighthood, he's still listed in credits as Sir James Lester, they just don't mention it anywhere else. Thank you for the tip on Claudia, because she should be Jenny, I like Jenny so much more, Claudia kind of irritated me.
Also, as a random comment, every time I rewatch the series I find other little things that changed when the timeline flipped. Like Abby's car going from dark green to dark blue, or Lesters suits and shirts going from all solid, to all striped. My favorite change was Connors wardrobe. I've got a crush on Connor ... and Stephen as is likely obvious.
- D
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [17 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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