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Review of chapter "The Vineyard" from darkk
Review:
more please
Review By [darkk] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Vineyard" from LordSia
Review:
Spike... Really didn't think things through, did he?
^^;
Review By [LordSia] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Vineyard" from Rubel
Review:
Interesting. Though I do wonder why all the choices were Marvel characters?
Comments from author:
Mainly because I know Marvel characters better than DC. And I already made one mistake with a Marvel character, so I can't imagine how many I'd make with DC characters. I didn't realize that Black Panther's powers were mystical in origin.
Oh, well. I'm in the process of rewriting this story. I'm trying to fix some of the problems that people pointed out. Such as taking characters out of character. But so far there's only 2 characters that I've changed their character choices. But I want to get the story as finished as I can before I start posting again. Thanks for your patience. I hope it will be worth it.
Review By [Rubel] • Date [12 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Vineyard" from Darklight
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Any new parts coming out this year?
Review By [Darklight] • Date [25 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Vineyard" from SAK
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Is Spike still conditioned to obey the First? You know like that trigger song, but a second one?

Please update again soon.
Review By [SAK] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Vineyard" from MistofRainbows
Review:
I'm done. Out of character spike, out of character other people. Good luck.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [11 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Vineyard" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great concept, well written, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Vineyard" from BrinLondofive
Review:
You know, normally I try not to comment on the inordinate amount of Spike-hate that goes on at this site, but here's where I call BS on it. Spike, years ago, may have tried to make a deal with ADAM, but the character had grown past that and by THIS point is one of the GOOD GUYS (soul or no soul).
Spike turning traitor during the First Evil conflict is not only WAY out of character, it is utter bullocks.
Good day to you, Sir and/or Madame.
Comments from author:
Truthfully, I'm sorry for this. Spike is truthfully one of the characters that I like on the show and if Angel had been truly available during this time I would have used him to deal with this little gripe that I had about the show, in that a vampire would suddenly become good once they gained a soul.
However, in response to your statement about how Spike has grown as a character up to this point, you are correct the VAMPIRE Spike had grown as a character and had become a good guy. Unfortunately, something happened at the end of season 6 that should have altered his character in a major way personality wise and for some reason the original writers didn't change his personality at all, true he was crazy for a period of time but nothing else beyond that. And truthfully I'm one of those that believe that he had never intended to get his soul back, I'm sorry but the statements that he made at the end of season 6 don't match the idea he intended on what he was doing being good for Buffy.
Review By [BrinLondofive] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Vineyard" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job on this story so far, please do your best to add more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [10 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from trongod
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Very good start; I liked the way you used the show's gaping plot line holes to further the story. Nu, when do we get more?
Review By [trongod] • Date [9 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from RafMereC
Review:
Kool update
Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [14 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Jhawksun
Review:
like it!! update soon please
Comments from author:
I'll try I keep reworking the next chapter because I want to get the fight between Faith, Spike, Xander and the Bringers just right before I post.
Review By [Jhawksun] • Date [13 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Twist within twist within Twists. You have chosen an eclectic group of heroes. How Old is the new Faith, cause if you are making her go through puberty again, SHE WILL COME FOR YOU & THERE WILL BE BLOOD.

Peace
Comments from author:
Actually I'm making it so that Kirika/Faith is older than she is in the main stream time line. She was found in the ruins of Sinister's lab after the death of Apocalypse. I'm making it so that one of the experiments that was performed on her actually advanced her age to roughly Faiths age. Unlike X-23 in the mainstream time line she had Magneto perform the adamantium bonding on her. While I don't remember it saying whether the process was as extensive as Wolverine's or as limited as X-23, I'm personally making it so it was more akin to Wolverine's process so her entire skeleton is laced not just her claws. Thus I'm making her at an age where she has already completed her growth.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [13 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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