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greysh Review:
Nice start! Please continue with this fic.
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greysh ] • Date [4 Jan 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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spk Review:
I am definitely intrigued. :)
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spk ] • Date [23 Sep 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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Stacia2 Review:
Interesting start. I'm definitely going to be looking for a second chapter. I would appreciate you explaining Willow's behavior. You want to watch your spelling/word use. In the first paragraph you have coach when I'm pretty sure you mean couch.
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Stacia2 ] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Not Rated
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morgyairReview:
HMMMMM sounds like an alternate reality....but one I can deal with, I look forward to the next chapter
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morgyair] • Date [4 Jul 09] • Not Rated
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mayoi Review:
wow, dramatic! i'd love to read more
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mayoi ] • Date [2 Jul 09] • Not Rated
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spacey Review:
wow, that's one mindfuck, that is
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spacey ] • Date [24 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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spring Review:
Oh wow. Now that is defently a way to catch a readers attention. I look forward to more of this exteremly interesting story.
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spring ] • Date [22 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ShannonK Review:
Interesting start, though kind of gross (actually kind of made me queesy there for a second). Cheers!
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ShannonK ] • Date [20 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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neverwill Review:
Really good start! I wonder if it was a random 'kill the humans' or if his parents were killed as part of a ritual for something. Hope you'll be posting more soon.
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neverwill ] • Date [20 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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VillageOrchid Review:
This is an interesting and dark start. What year in high school is this?
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VillageOrchid ] • Date [20 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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schulyr Review:
Disturbing start, I look forward to reading more.
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schulyr ] • Date [20 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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WolfiousOne Review:
I like the start, grisly :), but one thing bugged me... why didn't Xander smash a window?
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WolfiousOne ] • Date [20 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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BarefootXO Review:
An intriguing story, so far... I presume from the fact that Angel/Buffy and Oz/Willow are going on a double date that this is currently taking place some time during Season 3? Jasper
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BarefootXO ] • Date [20 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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Marcel Review:
Hmm... horrifying start (I'm trying really hard not to get in Xander's skin right now), but made me curious :) Tracking.
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Marcel ] • Date [20 Jun 09] • Not Rated