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Review of chapter "Omega Redux" from Mimaful
Review:
God those watchers were stupid! I mean, designing a drug to neutralise your big weapon? Who does that? Every time I watch that episode I think of in how many situations that could have been used against them. A slayer doesn't lack enemies.

Anyway, I really like this premise, I love Angelus and Alpha. Shame you haven't updated in ages. Please, please get back to this?
Review By [Mimaful] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega Redux" from spikeismine
Review:
Please update soon.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega Redux" from (Recent Donor)ArgyleButterfly
Review:
I love your description of Angel, "Jiminy Cricket with fangs" it suits him "To a T".

I hope you haven't abandoned this story as I am very curious to see how you plan on continuing this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ArgyleButterfly] • Date [2 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega Redux" from (Current Donor)deiticlast
Review:
I'll rhyme because of the day,
So please don't dismay,
As I'm actually pretty good,
As a writer like I should.

I just finished the first season,
And beyond all reason,
I'm skipping work today to watch,
Read and review every jot, tittle, and swatch
Of anything to do with this show,
And now I've got to go,
As I'm waiting on the next episode to load,
And my rhyming is actually below
The standards I've set for myself,
But I don't have the patience to think
Of more rhymes or pull my thesaurus from the shelf!
My rhymes are lame but I loved your story,
I'm stopping now while I still have some pride in my writing glory. . .

Again, so sorry. I just didn't want to be cursed by Willow, as the poem said would happen if I didn't rhyme.
Review By [(Current Donor)deiticlast] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega Redux" from Gideon
Review:
I can't imagine that the rest of the scoobies would let Buffy just drop off the map. Alpha really doesn't have any idea what he might be stirring up does he?
Comments from author:
Don't forget, Alpha has both Angel and Angelus' memories and minds at his disposal, so he might be a little better prepared than you think! But no, the rest of the scoobies are definitely not going to sit back and just do nothing.

Thanks for the review! This story is a bit on the back burner to a few of my other fics, but I haven't forgotten about it!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Omega Redux" from alexceasar
Review:
OMG! This is fantastic. Wonderfully done, especially the method used for the multiple personalities. I can't decide if I want Alpha to actually get to go through with imprinting Buffy or not. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm so glad the multiple personality worked for you. Updates on this story will be slow since I'm currently going strong with another fic, but it's not abandoned! Thank you for the review!
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega Redux" from Javian
Review:
Intriguing. And a little evil. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! mwah ha ha ha...
Review By [Javian] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega Redux" from (Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine
Review:
Ooooh great chapter! Good job yo!! Will Buffy be able to shake off the drug better now that she's older and had more time as the Slayer? I hope so, so that way she can hand Alpha his ass back to him. And wouldn't it be funny if Buffy had Willow make with the mojo to give Alpha a conscience on par with Angel during the early years of his Romany curse? That would be hilarious IMHO.

Anyway, nice work yo! I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you! You would think that Buffy might be able to shake off the drug more quickly this time, but then again, Giles was giving her a controlled dosage. Who knows how much Alpha plans to administer? :)
Review By [(Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine] • Date [8 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omega Redux" from FuerGrissaOstDrauka
Review:
You've definitely piqued my attention with this one. Can't wait to see what will happen next.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story! And thank you for the review!
Review By [FuerGrissaOstDrauka] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Too Many Cooks" from scarlett
Review:
me like =) I really hope that you expand on this story, I really like the idea that they imprinted angel and angelus's personalities in Alpha. I think its a great start =)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I currently have two other open stories (I don't know what I was thinking), but I'll be working on this one steadily if a bit slowly.
Review By [scarlett] • Date [4 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Too Many Cooks" from Katt
Review:
I Really liked this and wouldn't mind seeing more of it or other stuff you write. Keep up the good work.
Katt
Comments from author:
Thanks! And I've got a few other stories in the works, possibly even a series...
Review By [Katt] • Date [22 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Too Many Cooks" from TweedWizz
Review:
Heh. Just desserts indeed. I heartily approve.
Comments from author:
Thank you!!!
Review By [TweedWizz] • Date [21 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Too Many Cooks" from (Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine
Review:
Oooh that was excellent! I think you should elaborate more on this story, but that's just my opinion. Great job!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I’ve actually been really intimidated to post here, so your review made my day. And I have been toying with the idea of expanding this story, and I left some windows open (just who is this informant?), so we’ll see. I’ll have to watch ‘Omega’ again, though. Alpha is awesome, and I would hate to do him any injustice.
Review By [(Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine] • Date [21 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Too Many Cooks" from CPTSkip
Review:
AHHHHHHHH!!!! Great start but this story CAN'T be complete. What a horrible cliffy! You are an evil bard and will be going to that Special Hell if you don't write more. Please?
Comments from author:
I didn’t mean to be evil, I swear. :) I just wasn’t sure if I could pull off something longer than this without totally sucking. That and the fact that my muse hit a giant wall. I’m all for avoiding Hell, though, so I’ll see what happens after I give my muse some R&R… and maybe a troll hammer to break through that damn wall…
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [21 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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