Review of chapter "Well-Deserved Fuss" from
AngelBlackReview:
GAH! These are great! I obviously love the smoochies, but I also subconciously find myself waiting for the amusement their (apparently) unavoidable party crashing brings. Also, since you've been spot on with the characters so far, I'm really looking forward to how you write Tyler (aka 'Baby Boy').
Comments from author:
LOL! Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing these, both the smoochies and the other people walking in on them. I'm glad you like them!
~ Kyra
Review By [
AngelBlack] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Well-Deserved Fuss" from
TouchoftheWindReview:
A hint of JayTim there...wonderful...and Caleb taking charge...wow...baby boy is next!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it!
Review By [
TouchoftheWind] • Date [24 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Well-Deserved Fuss" from
IceWhisperReview:
Haha. Poor Tim. He's getting jumped by all these hot guys and they keep getting interrupted.
*sigh*
Though I get the feeling Jay was having fun with the show. ;)
Comments from author:
I know! Poor Tim! And I know I sure as hell wouldn't say anything if I walked in on any of them! Hell, I'd find a camera!
Review By [
IceWhisper] • Date [22 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]