Making Deanna a slayer was genius! And I loved Data's reaction to seeing Willow's DNA scan.

"Congratulations Dr Crusher, Its a girl." *snicker*

The soul bond between Worf and Faith and the way it turned out in this chapter was really good too. More please?

Thanks G, trying to flesh out the next chapter.

Nice work on the new chapter, I look forward to reading more soon.

-Since when does Faith know Klingon?

Hhee hee, you'll have to wait and see. I'll just say that Faiths as well as Deannas life has changed forever.

So Faith is a Doll and Worf is her handler. Interesting. :)

Lol. Caught that did you. I was wondering who would and comment about it. :-)

Just got through the rewrite. Great job. I'll be looking forward to reading more. :)

Thanks.

There's going to be a nasty revelation by Whistler, isn't there?

Somehow, Beverly's baby was stolen and sent two centuries into the past.

Okay, four centuries. I think I goofed somewhere in the math.

Lol. Goofy. :-)

uh oh!

Lwaxana's in TROUBLE!

The ONLY thing more stubborn than her is a Slayer, and they USUALLY didn't start HALF as stubborn as she raised her daughter to be.

Yeah, God when she starts to read her daughters thoughts she may be traumatized for life. Sineya doesn't like when someone meddles with her descendants, lol.

Now the question is, did Beverly have a daughter who was lost, or is this the first she's heard of something like this? Is she angry over being reminded of a lost daughter? Meanwhile it appears Worf has found his soul mate....
And gee, Willow just can't let it go. Steal one Barbie doll when she's 5, and she never lets Xander forget it. heh

LOL. With Bev it's complicated. will be explained, someone meddled horribly and a lot of people will be extremely angry, including a certain Q.

Your story sounds like Andrew - except he was more readable. Your biggest problem is that you don't understand the POV you're writing from; but add a heaping helping of over-histrionics, and generous sides of the Burly Detective syndrome, and you top it all off by doing enormously more telling than showing.

And that's a shame, because there are flashes where you show a real ability as a storyteller, and the story itself, as far as it's gone, is intriguing. Set aside all the dross, sharpen up your tools, and you'll see people recommending this fic right and left.

Andrew? Thanks I'll try to tone done the history even though it only really showed in the last couple of chaps. or maybe I'm misunderstanding you. And I believe in the TNG universe they always as a crew tried to figure out the unexplainable as it happened to them.

Case in point many of the episodes. were filled with detective syndrome as you put it.

Now there's some Klingon lore I didn't know! I can't wait for more!

Interesting, just wish it was longer.

Interesting, just wish it was longer.

Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)

Thanks. :)

Oh goody, it continues. Worf and Faith? Hmm, if Faith has a mommy this side of time, she might be a touch upset by that...

Thanks for writing

HMMMM, thats interesting. Thanks for the review.

Glad to see you continuing this. Boy will the ST people be surprised by the results. No medical/tech reason for Buffy & Faith to be extra strong...?... Angel is just undead, that's going to be weird for them of course. Hm, dental work etc would indicate their 20th century origin.
But of course the one we're all waiting for, the results of Willow's DNA check & possible relatives.

Thanks Allen, I'm trying so hard to get the chapters out sooner. But for some reason I can't get my thoughts onto paper like I want them. I'm quite frustrated with myself and this process, arrggghh!

oh please update again quickly...don't leave us hanging there!