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Review of chapter "Fond Farewells" from MamaLadyWolf
Review:
Still a story I come back to time and again. I would love for their to be more to this one. It can still make me smile and I can imagine the characters when they talk. Thank you for sharing with us.
Review By [MamaLadyWolf] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fond Farewells" from Beth
Review:
I think this one has potential. Please update as soon as you can. I'd like to know how things go for them all.
Review By [Beth] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fond Farewells" from littleoldme
Review:
I'm a little confused as to how Bobby didn't know that Dawn was Belladonna's sister? Wouldn't that make her his cousin, too? Or are we talking about a non-biological "sister" here?

ETA: Okay, so I see that this "papa" is her adoptive father- but she was only missing for a few years before she went into the Buffyverse, right? It seems odd that she would consider him her father and his kids her siblings to this extent so soon after being adopted. And it's also odd that she has an accent if she was born into a non-Cajun family and spent most of her time around them in her formative years, before moving into the guild...
Comments from author:
Hmm I obviously need to clean that part up. Dawn's birth family, the Drake's died when she was around 4 or 5, she was in foster care for a year, then sold to her "Papa." It was through the Guild that the monks contacted her and convinced her to do the dimension jump. She came back the same age she left 14. This is three years later. :)

I hope that clears stuff up!!
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fun in the Danger Room" from AllenPitt
Review:
yep, the Prof. won't be able to stand not-knowing about her background... hm, a 'job' she's wanted for... I just hope her new dad isn't a criminal type, heh.
Comments from author:
Her dad is definitely criminal!!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fun in the Danger Room" from Almadynis
Review:
I like this, but you have left several ends loose and it is driving me mad. More please!
Comments from author:
Glad you like it!!:) Thanks for reviewing!!
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Worried" from AllenPitt
Review:
run off... where to? New foster dad? Very curious as to who it is. Bought her? yikes. Maybe Matt Murdock ...(would find her in hell's kitchen or some such..? ) ---
Comments from author:
They ran off to the Danger Room. You will find out who her adoptive father is next chapter!:)

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Worried" from ArinnaBlack
Review:
It's interesting. Though, I'm not sure if Buffy would actually let Dawn go. Are you going to be adding the BtVS characters in or will this fic be solely in the X-Men 'verse? I'll be reading.
Comments from author:
It won't be giving too much away to say that time moves differently in different dimensions...so in Buffy's world Dawn hasn't been gone as long. A few Buffy characters will show up including: Spike, Angel, Oz, and of course Buffy.

Thanks for the review!:)
Review By [ArinnaBlack] • Date [2 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
Review:
Foster father? Anybody 'interesting' in terms of the Marvel universe? hm... does she have a usable mutant ability, ie something other than portal-opening? Will Prof X scan her mind and find out about her Buffy-verse history?
Comments from author:
Her adoptive father is from the known Marvel Universe and will be revealed soon. Her mutant ability is usable and will be in the next chapter, the portal that was created to bring her home was due to magic, her powers are energy based. Dawn's mind is hidden from telepaths thanks to her energy powers unless she chooses to let them in so the Professor won't be checkin' her mind out.

Thank you for commenting!!!:)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Jul 09] • Not Rated
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