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Review of chapter "Epilogue: Training Montage" from Harry
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The idea of weapons training does appeal to me. It shows up in one series of fan fiction stories in a Buffy crossover universe called The Wandererverse. If you DO choose to go into that, I suggest that you read up on the stories there. Might give you something to think about.
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Detective Beauty Queen III: Authority Song" from Harry
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EASY KENNEDY! Having Buffy under your authority is one thing. BUT, using it to lord it over her, IS SOMETHING ELSE! You don't want a upset Buffy Summers on your hands.
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Detective Beauty Queen II: Headshots" from Harry
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You present a very interesting argument, and it MAKES SENSE! I just hope that more writers of fan fiction will keep that in mind for the future when they do their stories.
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Detective Beauty Queen, I" from Harry
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So, now they want to bring Casady into the fold as well? I wish them the best. She may have figured some of it out, but I DON'T see her leaving the police department.
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet Natasha" from Harry
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I know who Charles is referring to: Benjamin Franklin Pierce, aka HAWKEYE! Charles may have been a by the book surgeon, but he knew that with Pierce and his ability as a surgeon, that Pierce COULD get away with breaking rules! And the Black Widow: I know her from Marvel. And I can see WHY Kennedy was drooling over her!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gangs of New York" from Harry
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Sounds like the Slayers have made some powerful, normal allies. With help from the gangs, they will be getting a lot of intel or getting the word out to track down problems.
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Raging Nostradamus" from Harry
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Yes, Yes, YES! Bull Shannon and ROZ! Two of my favorites! They made Night Court GREAT! Now, all we need are Harry, Dan, and Christine to complete the set!!!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No, the Other One" from Harry
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I knew it. I KNEW IT! Charles Emerson Winchester III ! The Winchester who used to give Hawkeye Pierce headaches! IF ANYONE could be a great advisor to the Slayers, it would be Charles! BRAVO!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On Call" from Harry
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Never got into Becker, but I LOVE the deal that he worked out with Kennedy. Its a win/win deal for everyone.
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
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When Kennedy decided to go to work on this project, she went ALL OUT! She got the G-Man's approval on it, Now, lets see who the support staff is going to be and how they fit in.
Review By [Harry] • Date [30 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Training Montage" from DieselDriver
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Copy cat?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [12 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Detective Beauty Queen III: Authority Song" from DieselDriver
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"Give me twenty" would hardly be a punishment to Buffy. She could probably do 20 pushups from a handstand position, using one hand and only the pinky of that hand. Interesting if she's wearing a skirt though... LOL
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [12 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Detective Beauty Queen II: Headshots" from DieselDriver
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Per your a/n at the end of the chapter. A lot of the stories on this site (that I've seen) have had vamps slowed down by bullets to the kneecaps, bullets to the head and bullets to the neck if it breaks the neck. Hey, no signals to the limbs the vamp falls down. Vampire's equivalent of the blue screen of death in a windows machine. It's not dead but it needs time to reboot.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [12 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Detective Beauty Queen, I" from DieselDriver
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Not many folks give this different idea about Kennedy. I kind of like it that she's actually maturing and becoming a truly good person.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [12 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meet Natasha" from DieselDriver
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I was thinking at the beginning of the chapter that Charles had indeed learned a lot at the 4077 and thank you for confirming it later. The book was way better than the movie and of course the series was so different that it's not really comparable except in the most basic terms.

Been so long since I read comics steadily that Superman was still completely unstoppable, the Hulk was still a mental deficient although there had been one period where he'd retained Bruce's intellect and Thor aka Dr. Blake still used a walking stick. it's sad to see what they've done to the superheros of my time.

What this tells you is that I have absolutely no idea who the "Black Widow" is.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [12 May 14] • Not Rated
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