Aaaagh! Angsty!!! I mean, clever-angsty in a way that didn't interfere with any of the canon events, but still so sad. The scene between Dean and Xander was just so powerful, it made reading about their separation that much harder. I don't suppose you'd be willing to write a mini-sequel about them seeing each other again, just to make me feel better?
Another thing I always wondered about in Supernatural/BtVS crossovers- why doesn't Xander attract Supernatural-smokey-demons? It can't be due to his other possessions, can it? Because he has been possessed multiple times by multiple things. If he can have a soldier and a hyena and whatever mojo Dracula left him with, why can't he have a demon, too? I think it'd be interesting to read-especially if he had a pheromone-induced one night stand with Dean, and then Dean later had to face him and possibly kill him...
Comments from author:
You just reminded me to dust off my folder for this story and get back into writing the sequel, the first chapter of which is up now, and it's probably not gonna be a mini one. :D Check out Blister.
The demon thing is an interesting idea. I'll hafta see if I can work that in somehow. Thanks so much for the wonderful review!
Review By [Jingying] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I absolutely loved this story. The descriptions, the characterizations, the build up was fantastic, and then the sex was hot! Thank you so much for sharing.
Comments from author:
Wow, thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Riyirowe] • Date [26 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Yay! Finally got a chance to sit down and read your story, and it was so good. You did really well with the sex scene and don't let anyone tell you different. I liked the sense of the desolate atmosphere you portrayed in the desert setting, and how well the boys are able to slide right into survival mode. Some more explanation as far as why the demons couldn't get into their refuge may have been in order, but nothing that detracted from the story. Sam's interaction with the scoobies was well done, but my favorite part was the bittersweetness of the ending. Dean's just got a year before hell, he should totally keep his promise.
So what's next? :-)
Comments from author:
Thanks! I thought it might be too flowery because I was trying not to go too technical, like a pamphlet or something, lol. It's ridiculous how my head refuses to cooperate with writing sex.
I had Spike saying something about nothing getting in to help Xander, 'cause he's supposed to be trapped and demon-humping would have gotten him out whether he wanted it or not, but I guess I kinda screwed that up by having the Scoobies and Sam gloss right over it. I'll rework it at some point so that's clearer.
I have no idea what's next. Well, I have ideas, but they won't settle down and get in line. :)
Review By [amjacob] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Not Rated
I thoroughly enjoyed this. It was quite a fun read and teased at a much deeper and intriguing plot that you should totally develop and write! :) But that's just my opinion on the matter. I would love to read the awkward 4 months later again running into each other on a joint hunt. So you should get on that...right now.
But in all seriousness, this story had just the right amount of smut and plot. Thanks for writing it!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I've written more, but I want to get it all done before posting. Too many WIPs going already. Glad you liked it. :)
Review By [BluLadyK] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Wow. Just wow. Is there going to be more? I loved thisstory and I would really like to read more. Loved it and hope for more.
Comments from author:
:D Thanks so much! I'm ecstatic to get wowed. Probably more, but I don't know when. I've gotta' finish one of my open stories first. It's good to have goals, and, ya know, sanity. ;)
Review By [MerKat] • Date [3 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
oh please tell me you're going to continue this at some point!!!
Comments from author:
There's some nibbling at my brain. Just a little HUGE chunk has been bitten out of it. I'm cursed. Can't write a one-shot/stand alone/whatever it's called to save my life. Don't know when I'll have more for this one, but I've already written half of something to follow it. Maybe half. Could be a quarter. I don't know yet.
Is that specific enough for you? ;)
Review By [wyldtala] • Date [3 Jul 09] • Not Rated