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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarthTenebrus
Review:
Way to set the stage and send a frigging chill through everyone's blood...

The implications of the metal having possession of Dawn are horrifying. As long as Skynet has a ready supply of her blood, it doesn't need the Time Displacement gear; it could open portals to any place and time it wants and send a whole army of HKs after its chosen targets. ..forget clandestine ops! It could even decide to restart the clock and make sure it goes online and Judgment Day happens before Sarah Connor is even born!
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from blueyes
Review:
Excellent! I am really looking forward to this one moving on.
Review By [blueyes] • Date [12 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from LeaFairy
Review:
OMG, I am seriously excited to have a new chapter to this story! *squeals* This chapter was truly incredible too! I loved Dawn and how anxious and than disappointed she was when Marcus didn’t call and than her excited squeal when he did call was so cute too. Hehe. Also her fall when trying to get to phone was completely hilarious as well. She really-really is clumsy =) I also again ADORED Spike to bits. He really is the bestest and awesomeness dog EVER! Haha. All kidding aside, I really do love his character and how he interacts with Dawn and Marcus… Especially Spike and Marcus’ alpha/dominance/distrust thing they have going on.

I think it’s kinda funny and ironic that Dawn wasn’t hurt during the fight with those a-holes (Spike was awesome with his defending her by the way) but was hurt *after* by *walking* into a ladder. *giggles* So very Dawnie :-) I did love Marcus’ reaction to her phone call and that he was the one who found her. I do wonder why Spike didn’t want Marcus to bring Dawn home though?

Anyways, I really loved and enjoyed this chapter to pieces! Thanks SO much for updating… I definitely look forward to reading more!!!
Comments from author:
I love getting reviews like these! :-) All reviews are wonderful, but every writer loves knowing WHY something appeals to a reader. Thank you so much!

And I have big, BIG plans for this little trio. LOL Keep an eye out for an update soon.
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [4 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from spikeismine
Review:
Awesome, I was waiting for Dawn to get into some kind of trouble, it always happens with Dawn. Spike is an awesome dog by the way, I want one. Please update soon.
Comments from author:
Yeah... I'd like to have one as well!
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [3 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from velara
Review:
I love how Marcus is perfectly happy to accept Spike's intelligence. :)

Also, love this story. Moar updates please :)
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [velara] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from tals
Review:
Yeah! Another update! I love this story, and was sad to see it disappear from the latest list way back when.... (not that I'm allowed to say anything, I have unfinished stuff that hasn't been touched in years, and currently have writer's block even on my manips). Anyhow, I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy this story. The writing is excellent, and the story feels really fresh and original to me. I'm especially impressed with how you manage to incorporate Spike the dog, without making it a Super!Dog! or letting it take over the story, yet still have it play a role, and have a distinct personality. Marcus and Dawn are both very well characterized as well. The overall tone of the story is realistic (given a universe of Fu Dogs and Terminators) and believable. Thanks for sharing.

Tals
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for such a wonderful review! I love seeing WHY a reader likes something. It's also helpful to see why a reader DOESN'T like something. Details are key in know what to do right and what not to do any longer. LOL!

Spike has been my favorite to write, with this last scene here being the most fun I have ever had writing before! LOL I'm glad that it conveyed what I was hoping it would.
Review By [tals] • Date [1 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from AllenPitt
Review:
if you're going by the tv show as well as film continuity, maybe teen-connor is around at this time? Cameron?.... anyway a T-1000 is very very tough, I don't see how Marcus can stop it.
Comments from author:
MUAHAHAHAH!

Ve haf our ways!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Rhyssia
Review:
Totally blame the whole Rolling Stones coverart fanart thing going on for finding this. Glad it's at fault though! Was a fun little read.
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [1 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Kirallie
Review:
This is great!!!! More please!!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from spikeismine
Review:
Sounds good. Looks like it is going to get interesting. Please update soon.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [26 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from LeaFairy
Review:
Completely brilliant new chapter!

Loved the first meeting between Dawn and Marcus and Dawn somewhat/kinda of remembering his blue eyes was just awesome too. I wonder if she will remember more of her time captive? I'm also completely in love with Spike, Dawn's 'dog'... He's soooo adorable. And his and Marcus' showdown/stare-out was totally cute.

Anyhoo, I'm really liking this and I look forward to reading more! Thanks for updating!!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I have to say... I think Spike is quickly becoming my favorite character in this story! LOL
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [16 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from tals
Review:
Really enjoying the story. A very interesting cross, and I like how you've brought Dawn into the terminator world. It's a very original way of merging the two fandoms. Thanks for updating. The new chapter fits in well with the older ones, keeping the same tone, despite the delay. Great work. I'm looking forward to seeing where you are taking this.

Tals
Comments from author:
Thank you! My muse just kinda petered out on me there for a while and nothing got updated! I think she's back now... so hopefully there won't be another long delay! :-)
Review By [tals] • Date [16 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Eureka
Review:
Love the new chapter. That definitely is a newish way to meet your protector! Can't wait till the new chapter is here.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Sorry it took so long to update... my muse just kinda took off there for a while! LOL But I'll see what I can do about banging out some more soon. :-)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [16 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Eureka
Review:
Can't wait for the next update. Going to look at the pics for this next.
I agree with whomever it was that asked if Dawnie will start to remember what happened in 2005. Also Good job on getting Fu Dog to Dawn to help prevent future kidnapping by Terminators.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [15 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from BlackBettie
Review:
Great fic mate! Love it so far! Sounds like an amazing read and I look forward to seieng more! Keep up the good work! You definitely have a fan! Cheers! =^.^=
Review By [BlackBettie] • Date [14 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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