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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IcemanII
Review:
Personally I liked it better when you dusted Angel. But otherwise Great Work on this version.
Comments from author:
While I liked the first story, this version will allow me to address some issues more easily than the previous version did.

Glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [18 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from melferd
Review:
***gentle grumble***
I REALLY liked it better when Xander dusted Angel. *wanders off, muttering and kicking rocks on path****

Treasurer, official Team DeathtoDeadboy! fanclub.
Comments from author:
I did, too, but the revised version provides untold opportunities for Vampire humiliation, so it all works out in the end. ;-)
Review By [melferd] • Date [3 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
In medias res. I was rather glad to see a sequel/Prequel. And that the last in series is still being continued.

Thanks for writing.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Working on the next chapter of YWLMWIA now. ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rune
Review:
You drop Alexander Potter on us with no explanation. In really long stories that would be ok because you could explain it later. This one is too short for that though. Still its good, so just keep going, you can tweak things later after its finished.
Comments from author:
Actually, if you'll read the next story in the series, "Don't make Me Angry...", everything will be explained quite clearly.
Review By [Rune] • Date [8 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ahh nice how Herm handled that jock *g*
also Ron entrance into the bar was nice...turning into a bear? good one.
And farewell to our poor Major.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.

And the way Hermes handled Percy was a LOT nicer than what would have happened had Harry, Xander or Ron witnessed him trying to manhandle her. ;-)

And as far as Wilkins is concerned, there aren't a lot of people who're going to miss him, aside from the vamps and some other minor demons who no longer have a free buffet walking around them.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [5 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jgoodman
Review:
good story
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate your reviewing
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [30 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ansku
Review:
Promising :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. Let me know what you think about the follow-ups.
Review By [Ansku] • Date [22 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from melferd
Review:
Now, I may just be a bloodthirsty wench, but I liked it better when you dusted him.
Just me, though, right?

Awesome re-write, loved the Mayor!Splat.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback.

And I liked dusting him the first time around, too, but this setup is going to provide for much more amusement in the future. ;-)
Review By [melferd] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
So this is either "what is Xander were a Seer and had wizarding magic and was on a trip in the UK when he was 12" or a retrograde of some sort. This all made enough sense, but I was wondering if it was meant to be a one shot or more than that? Thanks for sharing.

Review addition: Okay I read the prequels that you had posted which explains. Lots of stuff going on with managing different characters in the same story. Nicely done.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story and what you've seen is just a small taste of what's to come in Sunnydale.

Don't take anything that happened previously for granted, because with Ragnarok's help, Xander is going to make sure that the people he cares about don't get screwed over again, this time around, and that the Big Bads are turned into mincemeat before they can threaten any of 'his' people.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rob
Review:
Much better than the first version.

Well except for the dusting Deadboy part. ;)

Of course now he can stick around to be a straight-man.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

And even Deadboy can be redeemed, as I hope to be able to show in the future. (Maybe.)
Review By [Rob] • Date [6 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wolfkin
Review:
Love both versions of this one, but this one a bit more, just for the scene with Ron in Willy's. Priceless! ^_^
Comments from author:
Yeah, Ron has that particular knack (just like Xander) that makes him an ideal choice to handle the diplomatic aspects of any negotiations, doesn't he? ;-)
Review By [Wolfkin] • Date [6 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked this story of yours the first time I read it and you have improved it nicely. Now I'd love to see you continure the series. Lol!
Comments from author:
thanks. I'm definitely continuing the series and will continue working on the next chapter of "You Won't Like Me When I'm Angry" as soon as Real Life stops being so user-unfriendly. Two doctors' visits and a trip to the hospital for X-rays in three days is not much fun at all. ;-(
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordBilbanes
Review:
Didn't you kill Angel off in the previous version? I guess you must have found a new use for him.
Comments from author:
Yes, in the original version, Angel was toasted quickly and rather easily.

Some of my readers, however, pointed out that he had been treated rather capriciously and not given a chance to improve his lot as the other characters were. After some thought, I had to agree and decided to rewrite the story, since changing his fate would allow me to write some interesting interactions between several of the Scoobies in later chapters.
Review By [LordBilbanes] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Cracking good story.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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