Review of chapter "Unity" from IcemanII
Oz in Marvel
Very interesting ... I really enjoyed this fic. I'll happily read the sequel.
Review By [IcemanII
] • Date [14 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unity" from missinglink
Only reason for demerit is this could have been broken down a little bit instead of one long chapter. Sorry, but had to be done. That said, it was good, but not great. Some pluses and minus, though the minuses are mostly due to He-Man and its goofiness. Just my feelings. Now as to where they might head next, would think that Star Wars or Trek would be better as they might clear the palette somewhat from the cartoon side of things. Realistically you have a GI Joe/Transformers fic followed by a He-Man fic. A little does of live action would be a nice change of pace. As to where or whom you borrow, I would say Wars over Trek and maybe a Jedi Tara? Never seen that one and it might be neat to work with. Say a universe that saw Tara as the one who went slightly overkill with the magic and accidentally moved to Star Wars Universe with Xan who was trying to stop her at the time. Her magic is no more, but now it is Force sensitivity. Xan, recognizing the Star Wars setting, helps them to acclimate. As this would all be backstory, I would see SE Xander and Unity stumbling on Tatooine to find Luke training with Tera under Obi Wan. Xan had convinced Ben that trouble was coming for Luke and that training the two in the ways of the Jedi would help save lives. In the efforts following a deviated/altered run thru Episode IV A New Hope and other blurrings with BTVS and Star Wars it ends with Tara sacrificing to take out the Death Star. She then is able to join the duo, making it a trio before heading off into other worlds. What do you think?
Hope it goes well. Later.
Review By [missinglink
] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unity" from RafMereC
Review By [RafMereC
] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unity" from Cdog
Interesting start to this new series. I can't wait to see the situations that the unique versions of the Scoobies will come from, but something crossed my mind after reading the end. Some of my favorite stories might not exist anymore after the crisis. I mean the GI Joe/Transformer thing kinda got written in to a corner so they have to be rebooted, but not my JP/BTVS and *gasp* could Xander's Last Stand be part of this sordid affair. Oh well they were fun while they lasted, but in the end there can be only one.
I look forward to seeing who each sides recruits and the eventual battle . Although if at the end you have a Xander crying while holding someone's body I am gonna hit you with a virtual tomato
Comments from author:
You have nothing to fear, no matter how far away I get from Xander's Last Stand or Jurassic Park those ones are easily returned to simply by re-watching the films and being reminded of where I was taking things. As for Cobra Regenerated it will be getting a brand new reboot which focuses more on the plot elements from the Cartoons instead of the Comic Books this time. I'll keep some of the stuff from the first iteration, but there's going to be a lot of new and fun material.
As for who is taking part in this series, I'm not even sure where I'm going next with it. That's why I was hoping for suggestions from the readers, because I don't just want to use the stuff I've already worked on I want to interweave brand new plot elements and story ideas that I could never hope to work on as a full blown work for some wack one-off chapters.
As for the villains side of things, well there's going to be a rather dark tale rated FR 21 posted eventually which will feature Warren Mears, brainwashing and rape. I hope it won't be too extreme for this site otherwise I won't be able to put it up anywhere. :(
I'm glad you're giving this a chance and posting a review, I never intended this to be something just throw away and forget it, I want it to have lasting impacts on everyone who reads it similar to Crisis on Infinite Earths. Anyway, I hope you'll all enjoy it, now I just have to figure out what's next. LOL And thank you for the review, I was beginning to suspect nobody who was looking at this was liking it since I wasn't getting any reviews. :(
Review By [Cdog
] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]