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Review of chapter "Did They Pay" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Nicely done. I really like the way you have it set up that the SGC have known about the Slayer for some time now, it makes sense that information would have come to light after the Initiative.

I love the way you have portrayed Caldwell here. He's a solid, stoic man, but he definitely has feelings and it's always been obvious that he cares about his people and it would stand to reason he would care very much about his niece. Thanks for sharing this, I greatly enjoyed it!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [14 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Did They Pay" from nicjphill
Liked it! Sad but at least she got revenge and taped it for him to see!
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Did They Pay" from eriktheviking
A well written downer.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Did They Pay" from RevDorothyL
Neat! I can definitely see Caldwell behaving this well under trying circumstances, and he and Buffy probably would understand each other quite well.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Did They Pay" from Ramenth
While this story is interesting, you seem to have a little be of confusion with Buffy's backstory. Specifically you say, "It was at times like this that she thanked god that her mom had come around to the idea so quickly. She didn’t know how she would have coped if her mom had told her to leave."

Canonically speaking, the first time Buffy told her mother, she was put in a Psychiatric Ward. The second time, when she offered proof, Joyce _did_ kick her out.
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What i actually meant was in the end she accepted it but i probably could have worded it better.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Did They Pay" from (Current Donor)mmooch
This sounds like a good time to pull out the lessons learned from Angelus. Or that pedophile vamp that tortured Angel in LA for the ring of Amara. I hope the traitor Slayer suffered a little extra as well.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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