ok loving this story and want to read more please update again soon

Good chapter. I wonder what could happen with Dawn surrounded by magical stick wavers. :p

Great story. I hope you will write next chapter soon.

Yay!!! Great chapter!!

Nicely done chapter! I'm super excited that Dawn and co are going to the Quidditch World Cup. Awesome idea! I can't wait till they meet the Malfoys and of course Hermione too... She's my favorite HP character after all.

I also love that Angel's planning on moving to Scotland to be closer to Dawn. I wonder who else will go? Spike? Will Cordelia follow or will she stay in Sunnydale? What about Giles? He is her guardian after all...

Anyhoo, thanks for the update!!

Glad to see more of this.

Awesome story. I love how Dawn is Angel's. The monks wouldn't be powerful enough to make a soul. Please update soon.

Still looking good, you're dialogue is getting a little shaky though, it feels a bit forced. Maybe something to work on. Looking forward to more anyway, your story/plot is pretty good so far.

Yes, since this is what will be one of the"cross-over" pay-off scenes by all means take your time, and write extended dialog, positioning, etc. Looking forward to the next part.

Very intriguing story so far! I love Dawn as Angel's daughter. Very original. I look forward to reading more!!

Awesome update!! Can't wait to see what happens in this story it's really good!!

Seriously, I hate your cliffhanger! I was so into the story and it stopped...my poor little brain had a hard time comprehending what happened. Anyway, I love the story and the thing with Angel is great. Please continue!

So short but so good! Hope you update again!

I enjoy it, and cannot wait for further chapters.

On the issues of spelling and editing, it would probably be good if you got a proofreader to just look over it for any spelling errors. I sometimes run my work past an English major who lives across the hall, myself - just for spelling, mind you; he knows nothing of Buffy the Vampire Slayer. It's just good to get someone to just look for them, no matter how good or poor a speller one is.

If you're interested, send an e-mail via TtH to me and I should be able to do basic proofreading (spelling, grammar, conventions, etc.) for your stories.

EXCELLENT IDEA. I never would have thought that the Angel+Buffy in that weird time-space thing would create the spark that is Dawn. its true... How could the monks have formed a soul?

VERRRRRRRRRRRRRRY interesting :) I like your crazy mind.