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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from garrycooper
Review:
A very good story. When you have time please write more.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [28 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from KatieKat
Review:
ok loving this story and want to read more please update again soon
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from saturnssailor
Review:
Good chapter. I wonder what could happen with Dawn surrounded by magical stick wavers. :p
Review By [saturnssailor] • Date [28 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from aveave
Review:
Great story. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Review By [aveave] • Date [5 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Xeelia
Review:
Yay!!! Great chapter!!
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from LeaFairy
Review:
Nicely done chapter! I'm super excited that Dawn and co are going to the Quidditch World Cup. Awesome idea! I can't wait till they meet the Malfoys and of course Hermione too... She's my favorite HP character after all.

I also love that Angel's planning on moving to Scotland to be closer to Dawn. I wonder who else will go? Spike? Will Cordelia follow or will she stay in Sunnydale? What about Giles? He is her guardian after all...

Anyhoo, thanks for the update!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [29 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Glad to see more of this.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from saturnssailor
Review:
Awesome story. I love how Dawn is Angel's. The monks wouldn't be powerful enough to make a soul. Please update soon.
Review By [saturnssailor] • Date [13 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from RocksandGlass
Review:
Still looking good, you're dialogue is getting a little shaky though, it feels a bit forced. Maybe something to work on. Looking forward to more anyway, your story/plot is pretty good so far.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Yes, since this is what will be one of the"cross-over" pay-off scenes by all means take your time, and write extended dialog, positioning, etc. Looking forward to the next part.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from LeaFairy
Review:
Very intriguing story so far! I love Dawn as Angel's daughter. Very original. I look forward to reading more!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from RowanChick
Review:
Awesome update!! Can't wait to see what happens in this story it's really good!!
Review By [RowanChick] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Lize
Review:
Seriously, I hate your cliffhanger! I was so into the story and it stopped...my poor little brain had a hard time comprehending what happened. Anyway, I love the story and the thing with Angel is great. Please continue!
Review By [Lize] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Current Donor)AshDawnSoulmates
Review:
So short but so good! Hope you update again!
Review By [(Current Donor)AshDawnSoulmates] • Date [9 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)ElessarNett
Review:
I enjoy it, and cannot wait for further chapters.

On the issues of spelling and editing, it would probably be good if you got a proofreader to just look over it for any spelling errors. I sometimes run my work past an English major who lives across the hall, myself - just for spelling, mind you; he knows nothing of Buffy the Vampire Slayer. It's just good to get someone to just look for them, no matter how good or poor a speller one is.

If you're interested, send an e-mail via TtH to me and I should be able to do basic proofreading (spelling, grammar, conventions, etc.) for your stories.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ElessarNett] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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