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Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from HMaxMarius
Review:
*Applies absolute best Victorian street urchin look*

Please sir. Can we have some more?
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [3 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from bradsan
Review:
Wow it's been over a year. Do you think that there will be any update anytime soon because I would love to read some more.

I'm crossing my fingers and hope it will be sooner rather than later.
Comments from author:
Really? Yikes, that sucks. Sometimes I hate real life. I suppose it wouldn't take too much to wrap this story up so all that would be left would be to write the sequel dealing with the male 'slayers'. Just have to decide who gets forgiven and who doesn't.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [12 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from lilacsandroses
Review:
Hello!

Will there be an Oz's reunion? It would be interesting to see him with Tara and their reactions to each other. Also, I wonder how does Tara feel about Willow's betrayal to Buffy.

I hope you update soon. Best of luck!
Comments from author:
Ooo, oddly enough, I hadn't considered bringing Oz into this story. I think Tara is broken-hearted about a lot of Willow's actions since she died, not just the betrayal. I'll have to remember to work it into the confrontation scene later.
Review By [lilacsandroses] • Date [27 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from misterwhy
Review:
a good solid storyline you have here
hoping your muse is inspiring you soon
keep up the good work
Review By [misterwhy] • Date [5 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from bradsan
Review:
Wake Musie she has work to do. Tell her those sweet readers and reviewers are longing for an update. The Story deserves and update. Musie is acting mean.

Gosh I hope you will find inspiration to update this story in a not to long time because I really would love to read more. And evil as I am I want to see Kennedy's face when her powers are gone and whom she will blame for that. I bet she blames Buffy even knowing she isn't around. Bet she will say that Buffy told the PTB to do that or something like that.

So please wake Musie.
Comments from author:
I'm sure if she thought it was possible, KenKen would blame Buffy. Having the PTB listen to Buffy gives her hated rival more credit than Kennedy would want to give her, though.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from Compston
Review:
An interesting chapter and interesting story....
Comments from author:
Thanks. Hopefully I can get back to updating soon.
Review By [Compston] • Date [19 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from Faeri
Review:
Ch.17 was awesome, I cant wait for the next part to come out!

I hope you're able to update soon! ^_^
Comments from author:
Sadly, I haven't had much time to write recently and when I have, Musie doesn't want to bother with unfinished fics; she want to do oneshots. I haven't abandoned it though.
Review By [Faeri] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from lilacsandroses
Review:
Hello,

I have reread it and still liking it. I can't wait for the showdown with the minis and the Scoobies.

I was wondering will you be addressing the problem with Cordelia, I mean she doesn't deserve to be in the coma. Cordy could be a good addition to their council especially now Angel is working for the Evil Law Firm.

I hope the next update is soon. Please!
Comments from author:
Not sure. I might be tempted to go with the idea that it's kinder to release Cordy from her state of limbo.
Review By [lilacsandroses] • Date [13 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
some nice advice Phoenix got there and to the name problem.....just write as you want and after you are
finished tell word to replace every Buffy with Phoenix :) but that only works as long as you don't need both names
in a chapter :)
Comments from author:
Figured she needed some objective advice to help her solve the problem. It's my fault for continually writing stories where I change Buffy's name. You'd think I would learn, but nope!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [12 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from bradsan
Review:
You did an awesome job on this chapter, good job. Worth waiting for.

Good for Buffy to ask someones opinion who isn't involved with the matter and can give her an honest advice how she could handle it and the things that could happen when she takes their powers away or even binding them temporally. On the other hand I thought I read that she could take them permanently out of the Slayer line and erase them from the memory of the supernatural world. So to me it would be logic and saver if she could do that to the Slayer she binds permanently also. They would know to much and can cause to much harm if they want too by knowing to much.

If temporally bounded she has to understand that they will be on their best behaviour till they get their powers back and they could fall in the same bad behaviour they had before and they will be more careful to show that they are abusing them again.
They could put some mayor damage in a short time before Buffy will find out they are abusing their power again. The PTB/Whistler could be a solution on this one they can see more than Buffy ever will.

By taken them away or binding them. Buffy has to ask them why they think they are the best Slayers and why do they deserve it and not somebody else. Are they aware of the risk it brings with it. What do they love or hate about their power and how do they see themselves with the power or without it. How do they see people who don't have any powers. Would they hate it to have no power and why would they hate it. The answers will make the decision much easier.

Well don't be a stranger on this story I like to this one and give Muse a big kiss. Again good job.

edit: sometimes you have to make choices you don't want to but you know you have to. You know when you don't, people could get hurt or even die. Erasing them from both sides would be better but I have to admit it would be fun reading how Ken Ken would react when her powers are gone. I thought Whisler told Buffy that she has "power" over Willows magic also. Hmm can't wait how you gone solve this one.
Comments from author:
You read right. The problem is whether she'd be erasing them from just the evil side of the supernatural or from the good side too. I'm not so sure she'd want to be messing with the memories of the good guys. She didn't seem to like it when Willow did it to her in season 6, but if she left the memories of those like KenKen intact, you know Willow would go on a rampage to find out who got rid of her sex toy-- er, girlfriend.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
I think it is fun you added National Lighthouse day as a back story on this.
Comments from author:
When I realized that I would be doing a FaD using S&MK, I knew I had to make it something that would fit with this chapter.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [10 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from spk
Review:
Ecstatic to see this update! Cute crossover twist there. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. I loved that show growing up (still do).
Review By [spk] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
thrilled to read an update. thank you.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from clarityfades
Review:
Great chapter! I really liked that you tied it into your "Lighthouse" Fic-A-Day story. & I loved that Buffy still ended up babbling a little bit when she met Amanda's people. LMAO That seriously cracked me up. Also, I like that Amanda was cautious, only makes sense (to be honest). Can't wait to see what happens next!
Comments from author:
Hey, just because she's the Queen, doesn't mean she isn't still Buffy - even if she goes by a different name now. And Amanda had good instincts most of the time on the show, despite her lack of formal training most of her televised career with the agency.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [1 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: A Surprise Meeting" from Harry
Review:
Thanks for the continuity with your story for a day/holiday challenge. It was nice to see the references to that story. And, while Billy may not at this time take Phoenix/Buffy up on the offer, he might be a good recruiter of support staff for the group that Buffy and the Immortals are forming. Now, on to the Slayers and see who truly deserves the power and who do not!
Comments from author:
I think Billy would be a fabulous recruiter!
Review By [Harry] • Date [1 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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