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Review of chapter "Backlash" from Banditcat
This is one of my fav stories.
would love to see it continued.
Review By [Banditcat] • Date [27 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Backlash" from Vickzie
Oh poor Dawn!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Backlash" from garrycooper
Very Good !!!!!!!
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [23 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Backlash" from Raited
This story is awesome I love it, all angst filled dark and angry!
Review By [Raited] • Date [12 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Backlash" from Winterhart
I love this can't wait for more
Review By [Winterhart] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Backlash" from LeaFairy
Whoa!!! What the hell happened?!!! Is Dawn okay? Is Jean-Claude and the others okay? What happened with her spell? Did it work? Did it backfire? And if it did backfire, how bad? Was the whole thing with the green power, the Key? Was that Dawn's power that blew everyone (the wolves, vampires, etc...) away? Is she really that power in this world? Also what about Spike? Does he finally remember Dawn? And if he does, what will he do about it? And will the other BtVS characters remember too?

Anywayyyy, this chapter was AWESOME! As you can see I have a TON of questions though! =)

I loved Dawn's reaction to Jean-Claude's "I am your father". -- “Whoa… Darth Vader much!" -- Very funny. I also loved Jean-Claude and his trying (and falling) to calm Dawn down. I LOVE him as an over-protective father! I am also *very* curious about what Dawn's spell actually did - besides release a lot of power, obviously :)

Her speech (her plea for Jean-Claude to kill her) at the end in french was *very* intriguing as well cause she just said earlier that she can't speak french... does that mean she has her 'memories' of her 'life' in the Anita Blake world now? And will she have them when she wakes up? Hmm... It would be a pretty interesting twist that's for sure :-)

Anyhoo, this was pretty damn good chapter - Thanks bunches for the update! I can't wait to read more to see (read) what happens next!!
Comments from author:
Hi, wow you are awesome - thanks so much!!!!

anyhow I will try and update soonish. This one is for free - yep spell did backfire quite spectacularly and it will have some rather odd consequences. I will explain more about the spell as story progresses

bye x
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Backlash" from Xeelia
Love the story!! As for the Order of Dagon, that's the monks who made Dawn. Any chance of Spike landing in the Anita'verse and being like their vamps??? I can't wait for more!! Thank you so much for updating!!

PS Will Willow be properly punished for her hand in everything?
Comments from author:
thanks for review - and for clueing me up on the order of the dragons... hmmm I can feel another subplot being introduced....

as to spike (evil author chuckle) wait and see!

PS willow - nah probbaly not - Im not a willow hater, but she wont feature a lot in this story.
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Backlash" from KenjaKitsune
I really enjoy this story and can't wait to see what all happens since there is so much that could be done with this idea. Seeing this update was a more than pleasant surprise and I hope the next chapter comes quickly. :)
Comments from author:
will try but its difficult sometime...thanks for review x
Review By [KenjaKitsune] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Backlash" from Almadynis
Wow...dang...and crap. Poor guys! All of them! This is horribible!
Comments from author:
Yep its getting real dark.
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Backlash" from mariegilbert
I was pretty excited to see a new chapter up, so I re-read the whole thing to get the full enjoyment of a new chapter. I'm interested to see what Spike does next, and what goes on as an after effect of Dawn's spell.
Review By [mariegilbert] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Backlash" from lucie
I am so glad you updated your story! I wasn't really hoping for it anymore and it made my day so thank you! I can't wait to know everybody's reaction to Dawn's spell... Will Anita freak out when she sees Dawn's notes on magic, I wonder! Her "daughter" knows much more than she thinks!!
Anyway, I am sooo waiting for more!

(Btw, "save her" in French is "sauvez la". And "kill me my father that is not my father" would be "tue moi, tue moi, mon père qui n'est pas mon père". But it just a detail :)

Oh and pleeease, don't bring any Btvs character over, pleeease (evil eye toward Spike)! I think it's usually bad in fanfictions. But I trust you even if you do it!
Comments from author:
thanks so much for your review. I wasnt sure if many people were still reading so makes me all giddy to read the reviews posted. As to your questions..... hee he

btw - thanks for the french - will try and edit asap. I just used a translation thingie on the net. My bad!
Review By [lucie] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Backlash" from AllenPitt
You're back! I'd started to think you'd given up on this story. Thanks for continuing it. Hm, when Dawn does a spell she doesn't do it in half measures. Ouch. So... it didn't work? I assume there will be 'consequences' as Spike used to say. Speaking of, any chance of him appearing? They really need some info, stat. I hope they realize from what happened that there's more going on than Dawn going nuts.
I'm also starting to wonder if that monk really knew what the hell he was doing, heh. Hey. Any chance there's an Order of Dagon in this reality? Just wondering.
Comments from author:
hi just edited the story and added a very very small bit with spike .... enjoy :-)

Yep the spell majorly backfired which I reckon is a kind of Dawn's MO. And things are about to get interesting. What with JC in major parental protective mode. and a twist coming up .... its going to be interesting.

btw whats the order of the dragons I gave up on AB after Obsidian blade - she became too powerful and whorish for me.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from PowersBeDamned
Please Update!!! I love your story and I think its amazing. Your plot is original and everyone is in character! The cliffhanger at the end is killing me though! Don't give up on this story!
Comments from author:
wish granted
Review By [PowersBeDamned] • Date [8 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from dhelm
Great story, looking forward to the next part.
Comments from author:
thanks xx
Review By [dhelm] • Date [18 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from hikarisama
OMFG!!!! I love it!!! I cant wait for the next chapter, you ROCK!!!
Comments from author:
OMFG!!! ....yay I feel like I can rock the world - next chapter up soon
Review By [hikarisama] • Date [4 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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