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Crisis of Limited Xanders Interlude, Warren Mears

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Review of chapter "A Heroine Ensnared" from Tjin
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*Poke* *Poke* Is it dead? *Poke* *Poke* I don't know, it seemed to be about halfway through and then it just sorta... stops... *Poke*
Review By [Tjin] • Date [9 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Heroine Ensnared" from kelvin
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you weren't kidding about the adult content i guessing this story isn't getting any more updates huh? very dark
Review By [kelvin] • Date [12 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Heroine Ensnared" from Cdog
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Wow, for a second I was gonna get the gamestop bunny that says "Holy $#!+" as a way to express myself. You definitely weren't kidding about this one being dark and porny. To be honest I never expected Warren as a major threat, I mean the one we saw was a punk with a gun that got a lucky shot and his comic version while canon just seemed like a new character instead of the one previously shown.

Well this has started setting the pace for the crisis and I can't wait to see how things go. And I hope you do with the rest of the series like you did with this, having one shots for heroes and one shots for villains leading up to the main event.

And before I forget what is this Adult themed series you mentioned.
Comments from author:
One-Shot? Uh, I don't think so there's still more to this story, I broke it up into two chapters because people complained that The Pact was too long. Also half of the second part of the story is filled with more porntastic stuff.

A few years ago I was working on a major self-insertion fanfiction series. A lot of it is still up at FF.Net and there's a whole bunch of material I haven't typed up yet. I needed a foil for my main character that would counterpoint the hero who some might consider a Gary Stu though I never wrote him or intended him to be that way. He builds a team of Super Heroines, his wife and a few friends from his home reality plus some Marvel characters. Warren originally gained his powers via a Demon Overlord called Omnibus who originated in the Star Trek universe my character visited.

When I began to consider who the primary villain team should be I cooked up this idea where Warren would use his powers to rape and enslave the Heroines of the DC Universe as well as a few villains and make them his own team of super villainesses. This sequence of events was to be told in my Adult Themed series, which would have all been titled Heroine Enslavement + the Chapter number and who would be featured.

Since I've sort of dropped that one storyline/universe in favor of tackling new ideas that aren't so all-encompassing I decided to modify the Warren story for my Crisis of Limited Xanders. That's why it will have tons of porntastic stuff and things most ascociated with Super Heroines in Distress stories. You know the stuff you find on some adult sites where people write that they get kidnapped and raped and stuff. Usually they end them either by making them slaves or having them escape and thwart the kidnappers. Anyway that's neither here nor there. I was tackling a different medium of writing, and now I get to share it and as a bonus I get to incorporate it into a series that makes everything relevant again.

Now I just need to figure out where Buffy and Xander are going, fortunately I have the second part of this story to type up to tide folks over until my mind figures stuff out. ;)
Review By [Cdog] • Date [15 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Heroine Ensnared" from missinglink
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Wow. Just Wow. That was porntastic. Very nice addition that not only helps paint the scum Warren is and plans to become, but also a nice segue into the recruitment drive to come. Again, don't know if some will be offended, but the subjugation of WW was well written and both serves a point as well as gives a dirty thrill to the reader. Props to you.

Will be curious just who you will have both the light and dark guys head for to augment their teams. Also am wondering if the WW was a counterpoint to Xander getting a Buffy, even one with Key powers. If you didn't intend then oh well, but if you did then I guess we can assume that you will be showing the point and counterpoint as you move the recruiting drive forward. You know, if you wanted to do a big grab, just get the Femme Fatales that Xander has working for him in the DC one with Xander married to Harley and Pam. That would be a large group in one fell swoop. Just a thought. Do hope you get some more on that one at some point. Still has to be one of if not my favorite woke up in Vegas outcome ever.

Just keep it coming and if you need prompting, ask and you shall receive. Later.
Comments from author:
Warren got Wonder Woman first because I just really dig her chracter, in retrospect though it could be considered as a counterpoint to Buffy. Legion of Ex-Villainous Babes is not going to be part of my Crisis series, otherwise I would have already added it like I did Cobra Regenerated 1.0, so there won't be any travelling or rebooting or what have you of that story.

Where I go next is still up in the air, but there will be a second chapter to this one, with even more dirty thrills for the readers and a confrontation between Warrens' new recruit and his demonic creation. Hope you'll enjoy it. :D
Review By [missinglink] • Date [15 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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