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Review of chapter "Your kidding me right?" from aidensmom
Review:
update soon? this has great potential.
Review By [aidensmom] • Date [12 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Your kidding me right?" from spring
Review:
WHAT?!?!?!?!? Is this all! What happened?!?!?!
Comments from author:
Sorry I'm such a idiot when I first uploaded the story I forgot to change it to not complete so it will be a full story.
Review By [spring] • Date [15 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Your kidding me right?" from LallaBelle
Review:
Alright. But it feels lacking, in that it seems like half the story is missing or something.

Otherwise I find it could have some real potential if you elaborate upon it, even extending it into a full-on story or even just a short story.
Comments from author:
It is a full on story when I was uploading it I forgot to put in 'no' for the complete or not thing.
Review By [LallaBelle] • Date [15 Jul 09] • Not Rated
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