This is a really neat story. I like the idea of just Willow and Tara in the world of the X-Men. Your portrayal of both Tara and Willow is excellent. I like the powers you gave them, and the idea of Willow being Pietro's daughter and Magneto's gran-daughter. It's a bit far-fetched in canon, but that's why this is fanfic, right? It's hard to see how Willow and Tara would meet in such a situation, though. Will they be enemies, or will Willow/Tara eventually run from her grandfather/Xavier? I do wish you would update soon, if you can. Meneldur.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Err, not really as easy as you'd think. Pietro doesn't get around much, Wanda sometimes had flings but was mostly into Vision (to the point that she created children for herself with him), and Lorna has been associated with Alex Summers and maybe one other man if that throughout the years. And none of them would be willing to put their daughter into Magneto's care in canon. So while this may be 'easy' for you, it's largely nonsensical from where I'm sitting.
And before you ask, the popular story you're thinking of has Willow as a cousin of Magneto, not a direct linear descendant.
Review By [JoeHundredaire] • Date [1 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Erm, you do know that Billy and Tommy ARE mutants, right? Being the sons of Wanda Maximoff and the grandchildren of Magneto and all? S'like throwing in an author's note that the sky is blue. O_o
Comments from author:
I wasn't sure if they counted as mutants, as they are creatures of a magical nature as opposed to humans with genetic mutation. From what i remember Wanda made them originally from the shards of Mephisto's soul, and then when he absorbed them, she re-made them so...
Also, it's called fanFICTION for a reason. Not to sound rude or anything, but this is my story and I therefore have the authority to twist the characters and/or plot line as I wish. Thank you anyway, I appreciate the review. I'm sorry if the last bit was a little rude, but I've seen stories around where they twist the characters around a LOT more than this.
Review By [JoeHundredaire] • Date [1 Feb 10] • Not Rated
I like this so far, it's very interesting. The mind thing that Tara did was kinda cool. I have to think/wonder if Tara's nightmares are her memories of Sunnyhell. I look forward to the next installment of this story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [31 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Hi baby! When i first read the chp I thought that Eric was her Father but nice twist his son being her dad...maybe write some more background for him so we can get a feel for his character...and I see we have encountered Dark Veiny Willow...very cool...
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [31 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter three" from PiedraLumbre
Review:
Intriguing. There really aren't enough Buffy/X-Men crossovers out there, so I'm always happy to see more. I'm looking forward to seeing Willow show up in a less metaphysical way as well.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much :D She's in chapter four now, i hope you enjoy.
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Not Rated