Review of chapter "Chapter 7 - Home Sweet Hellmouth?" from nerfherder
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Yet another fic that cries out for completion! Good work and characterization with clear scenes and detailing. Keep it up and give us some more chapters please.
Review By [nerfherder] • Date [29 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 - Home Sweet Hellmouth?" from ElDani
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I love this story for several reasons, but mostly because it's been huge fun to read.
The story in general shows Xander how I would've loved to see him on the screen, his flirty friendly relationship with the two Summers' women is certainly not hurting any. This "undercover operative Xander" stuff is hilarious and all those other factions that build around him have quite a bit of potential.
My hope is that you'll find back to this story at some point.
Review By [ElDani] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 - Home Sweet Hellmouth?" from Letomo
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Just reread this excellent story again, and am hoping the muse will inspire you to continue it; it is entertaining, the characters mostly feel right, with artistic differences, and it doesn't feel forced like so many do. Thanks for writing, and please continue!
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 - Home Sweet Hellmouth?" from Raziel
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Just reread the story i hope you eventually get around to adding more chapters i always thought this was a good story.
Review By [Raziel] • Date [16 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 - Home Sweet Hellmouth?" from JonnyNapalm
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This is such a fun story....the camaraderie between Dawn and Joyce is a joy to read... and I hope that you come back to add some chapters to this one when you've got the time. I know your generous typing duties for dogbertcaroll must keep you busy, but I hope that your own creativity has some time to shine. This story could use a few more chapters. I know I can't wait to read them... I'm sure there are others too.
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [15 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7 - Home Sweet Hellmouth?" from tomst