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Review of chapter "Debriefing" from raxadian
I wonder if all those mini Terranbots can combine into a bigger bot?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [17 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shadowy Conspiracies" from raxadian
Well, all evil Overlords need a Starscream to keep sharp.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [17 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Human Alliance" from raxadian
Well, this would be easier to understand if all fics where in a single story.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [17 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Problems" from raxadian
Ah yes, the usual human with Allspark powers idea.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [17 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Debriefing" from (Past Donor)Kanzaki
What's with all this negative speak at the beginning of the page?

I'm trying to enjoy your imagination, dear sir, and this dispare is distracting me.
Twice now I've had to go back a chapter just so I can keep the mood and the actioin going in my mind.
That is the only real, glaring flaw in your storytelling ability that I've noticed.

That said. I enjoy your imagination, and it makes me happy that there is a Xander-centered Transformers crossover that for all intents and purposes, looks like it will have a satisfying conclusion. Your plot is solid, your dioluge is not jarring and your choreography of the action is satisfactory. (Though I can total tell that you are a male-type creature ^_^, I've read the first fic in this series and you didn't have to actually tell me... You told on yourself in some of the exposition)

Now, this is the part where I politely tell you to pull your self together (talking about you and reviews) and inquire after the next chapter... because I would very much like to read it.

(ps I don't thing the Transformers section gets that many reviews anyway)
Review By [(Past Donor)Kanzaki] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Debriefing" from Questara
The story is interesting, but I sometimes find it hard to follow as it jumps between all the various deception factions and group.s
Review By [Questara] • Date [6 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Debriefing" from Hanzo
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Debriefing" from Morgomir
Great sequel so far. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Debriefing" from mountainelements
I'm not sure about everyone else, but I'm having trouble following what's going on. That may simply be because I've only seen the first Transformers movie. Maybe people aren't reviewing because there isn't very much BtVS in this series? I started reading this series because I enjoy reading about Xander but he seems to only be playing a side role here.
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [17 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Debriefing" from Letomo
I like this series. Just found it yesterday, and blazed through the entire thing. Well written, kept my attention, and flowed well.

I just hope you can bring the stories to a bit more completion - as is, it is frustrating to get this far, and be left hanging.

Ah, well, the muse strikes when and where it will.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [31 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Debriefing" from Bobboky
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Debriefing" from Cdog
You know when I was thinking up a review to write I kept thinking about the scene with The First making a body from the broken Decepticons and then I started thinking about The Fallen and how she should take over his body after he dies and then it hit me.

The First Fallen.

So many jokes came from that idea that a part of me actually started to think you were gonna do it.

At least it did until I remembered that I'm the one that thought it up.

I'm really enjoying this story, I mean if you can get someone to actually enjoy a My Little Pony xover and not see it as a joke, then an action story like Transformers is just a given. Although I will say that a small part of me was surprised you picked this up after so long.

A twisted part of me though up an idea about Xander and Flame's situation, after a weird dream once, that for all intents and purposes was specially designed sex toys grafted in the right spots. You know which spots ;)

And before you wonder... Yes, they were vigorously tested.

As to the TECH weapons I knew Xander was going to have something to do with fixing them, but I had it pegged as Xander's All-spark energy properly activating them. Not just him pulling a MacGyver and fixing them himself.

I look forward to whatever you have planned next and I can't wait to see more of Nemesis Prime (I still see the evil version of Optimus from Robots In Disguise every time I hear that name) and Hot Rod. I'm still trying to figure out just how Xander is Xander and Hot Rod at the same time.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [20 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Debriefing" from Eureka
TYVM for the two chapters I just got to read. I am sorry that you feel that folks aren't enjoying your stories since the reviews have been few and far between.. I know that I have been kinda slow on the review myself and hope that you don't quit on either story. I think the other one is the next on my list to be read.

So Xander is in for a big problem? Why won't they warn him? Whistler even told them to, and they seem to think that he will harm the one who warns.. LOL Will Sam actually be in this one?
Comments from author:
Aside from a brief cameo Sam Witwicky will not actually be featured in this story. As there's really little that would affect Sam prior to the events of Revenge of the Fallen.

I'm sure that people are enjoying the story, it's just kind of disappointing to post a new chapter and see nothing at all for it during the three or more days after it's gone up. As for warning Xander... The Powers have always been hands off unless it's world ending dangerous and I highly doubt that they're too concerned about the Decepticons hunting Xander at the moment.

Now what's happening over in the other story with Buffy... They may consider involving themselves with her. *Hint Hint*
Review By [Eureka] • Date [19 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Debriefing" from QOShea
I'm horrible when it comes to reviewing, I generally just mark a story as tracked and follow it from there.

But since you asked, I am enjoying this little series of yours and am looking forward to seeing what else Xander accidently brings to life.

Where's KITT when you need him? LOL
Comments from author:
In another universe not of this reality. LOL Not sure he'll be bringing too much else to life at the moment, but he's definitely in for some wild times. After all, the Decepticons aren't going to just sit there and let him keep being all carefree and safe, now are they?
Review By [QOShea] • Date [19 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Debriefing" from CageFire
Another nice chapter in the series. Please don't be discouraged if people don't review every chapter. I personally don't know very much about the entire transformers series, and I can't really think of anything to contribute. However I will say that I'm looking forward to reading more. Thinking about it, I'm not really sure where this story is currently headed. Presumably they're going to have to keep xander away from the decepticons.
Comments from author:
Perhaps. To be perfectly honest I haven't planned out everything completely in this story, I'm going with keeping things simple though so Xander and Decepticons are definitely un-mixy things.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story though and thank you very much for the review.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [19 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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