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Review of chapter "Meet Mr Alpha" from liability
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just found this story and it is really good, I hope you write more soon.
Review By [liability] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meet Mr Alpha" from aveave
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This is great story. I hope you are going to write next chapter soon.
Review By [aveave] • Date [20 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet Mr Alpha" from Markelo
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I like this one.
Review By [Markelo] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet Mr Alpha" from Rhyssia
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Very interesting, and pretty well written.

I do have to say, however, that chapter 5 has a lot of issues, the main being beteween first and third person (I/Faith) and proper use of me/my she/he. ;)
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [10 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meet Mr Alpha" from spring
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although this is a wonderful chapter it has a lot of mistakes. You swiched pov from third to first person.You also mentioned earlyer about Faith not being able to spar with the Cullens because of the fear that they might not be able to control themselves if she started to blead and then you claim that she is sparing with Jasper the one with the least amount of controle. I look forward to the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thanks I changed the first/third person mistakes. I am writing a story in first person at the moment and I keep getting them confused. I also changed the bit about Jasper sparring with Faith. They still do, but Faith was the one the one that lowered the rules. As for him having the least amount control. This is where her 'predator sense' kicks in. It will be explained later I promise.
Review By [spring] • Date [9 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Furry Time" from AngelBlack
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I is reviewing! I likeit=]
Now write faster!
And give me Jacob Black goody-ness!
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [23 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Furry Time" from starsshine
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I love your story so far! Very detailed and interesting plot so far. Love the interactions of Faith and the Cullens. Please update soon!
Review By [starsshine] • Date [18 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Furry Time" from spring
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You had me really confused when Trick came in to the picture until I remembered no derect sun light! I love this chapter the worry that Faith has is just rolling off the story. As you can tell (I hope) I love this chapter and I eagerly await the next installment.
Review By [spring] • Date [6 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Furry Time" from DarkLady
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More please! Hmm I'm trying to work out who you might possibly pair Faith with. There's Embry(
Review By [DarkLady] • Date [6 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Furry Time" from Missingviolet
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oooh!!
awesome-ness! cant wait for more!
are u going to pair faithy up with someone?
Review By [Missingviolet] • Date [6 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome To Forks" from KzintiKiller
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Is this post-New Moon? It can't be if if Rose, Jasper, and Emmett are still in school. So how are the wolves involved this soon? Jacob shouldn't be chasing after Bella yet.

KK
Comments from author:
The Cullens know about the wolves, but Bella doesn't.
Review By [KzintiKiller] • Date [6 Nov 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Acceptance" from Missingviolet
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nice!
Review By [Missingviolet] • Date [4 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Acceptance" from Emeraldfire
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I am so loving this fic!!!!!
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Acceptance" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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lol. excellent fic so far.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Acceptance" from spring
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ROTFLMAO..... that last cometment from Rose..... I love this oh so wonderful chapter and extremely glad to see this story updated again. Personaly I think that the Cullen's would be fine sparing with Faith if 1) they fed recently and 2) they were careful. As always I love this wonderful story and I eagerly await the next installment.
Review By [spring] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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