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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
Short but well written again. How does this crossover to Firefly?
Comments from author:
Thanks! Rianne was Saffron in one of her many roles.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cptquinn
Review:
oddly enough, I Loved it...(I usually go for uber long multi-chapter stories)
and I dunno what the last person is really complaining about, not really that hard to know who it was with the X man.
Comments from author:
Thanks! (And I usually go for long, multi-chapter stories, too!)
Review By [cptquinn] • Date [18 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Orion
Review:
It took me rereading it twice to figure out how this was a firefly crossover, which isn't a good thing. It's a good idea, but I was not impressed with your execution.

Since you utterly ignored anything firefly except for one character, you might have considered having her use the name that she did in Firefly. Or had Xander moping about some magical portal to the future before getting picked up by her at a spaceport bar.

With neither, I was a bit confused. And with nothing further to make things clearer, that never went away.

Take or leave my suggestions as you wish, it's your story, but I certainly hope you at least think about it.

Even though I didn't care for it much, thanks for writing - always good to see more firefly crossovers.
Comments from author:
I'm sorry you didn't enjoy it. I thought that figuring it out would add to the fun of the drabble, but obviously not for you.
Review By [Orion] • Date [18 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fitsofrage
Review:
Typical Xander. He has the worst luck. Though, I always did wonder why on the show he never got hit on by any male demons. Maybe Larry was one lol Great job though ^_^
Comments from author:
Heh, true. Though we don't know the gender of the ones that were after him during Willow's will-be-done spell. :-)
Review By [Fitsofrage] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Short and not-so-sweet. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Not Rated
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