I like it...And if you thought the Scoobies were scary before...wait'll you see what having superspies for parents will do...LMAO.
Just two quibbles:
First, I believe you meant Metatron (the name of the Voice of God from Dogma) not Metreon (which is either the name of a shopping mall in San Francisco, or one of Raven's power mantra words from Teen Titans).
Second, patron is a male title. Specifically, a father figure. Unless the vengeance demons were both male, I believe the word you want is matron.
Edited to add:
The Catholic Church tends to only use male titles, since only males can be priests. Matron is the proper term, unless you're describing a female saint as somehow become male in the process of sainthood.
Comments from author:
Blame Wikipedia's entry on 'Dogma' for the spelling of The Voice's name. Second I was raised Catholic and at least in that religion a 'patron' saint can be either male or female don't ask me why it just is. Anyway thank you fof the review!!! And yes their new situation even scares me!
Review By [Difdi] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Glad that Giles and Spike didn't miss out on the chance at new lives in Miami! Will there be sequels, as the 'kids' grow up?
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review! Thanks to the reception that the series has gotten so far there will probably be at least a few more of the kids as they grow up (and some of the 'missions' that they send themselves on).
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [19 Jul 09] • Not Rated
This end for Giles was perfect, thank you for writing it! Oh goddess, Giles and Spike in one family...those poor parents. I loved the Metatron, people rarely cross with Dogma, you did a wonderful job. This series is great!
Comments from author:
Waverly you know that your suggestion are some of the things that I have been feeding my Muse. Thanx!!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [19 Jul 09] • Not Rated