Review of chapter "Prologue" from Eureka
Review By [Eureka
] • Date [11 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from IcemanII
Haiku (Great work on this story.
If only it was longer.
It would be great.)
Good start I just wis- "The 'W' word" that chapter one was longer.
Review By [IcemanII
] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Cdog
I was not expecting her, but I can already tell it's gonna be fun.
Review By [Cdog
] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from BlueEyedJedi
High marks, for creating a new avenue for Harmony, I look forward to seeing where you take this series. An Assumption that the eventual big bad will be Warren (and the master he pays lip-service to UNICRON.) Princess Diana needs to walk tall & free, perhaps Calliope will intercede on behalf of her 'Sister'. That being said I am curious who else Warren plans to Collect, Galatea, Supergirl, and/or Starfire would be so easy to subdue.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi
] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from missinglink
Point deduction for blond bimbo usage. Ugh. Why'd it have to be Harmony?
Two things came to ming reading this. One, will the Death Star turn into Mega Maid?!?! Please, please, please!!! And will Xander make a Spaceballs reference or two just to tweak Yogurt... I mean Yoda?
It could be something subtle like where's the flamethrower? Or calling Vader Dark Helmet. Maybe have ask Leia if she's druish.
If you can't tell am a big Mel Brooks fan and if you are going to make it goofy by making Harm a Jedi then I say go for it and add more humor just to get the cheap laughs you know are there waiting. Or heck, do a History of the World Part 1 reference and have the day saved by... Jews... In... Space... followed by a nice song and dance number.
Still would have prefered you use Tara, but oh well. Don't know, but see Harm too easily swayed by the dark side and being sold by shopping or ruling minions to be a goody goody. Just me. Almost think she would be better on Warren's team as a Sith. Keep it up. Later.
Comments from author:
I'm not sure why exactly you don't like Harmony being included, the whole point of Crisis of Limited Xanders was to have some fun, change things up a little, and also try something different. Harmony is not a blonde bimbo in this universe, we don't know what her previous history with the scoobies is yet, perhaps she replaced Cordelia in canon. We don't even know how she got zapped through a portal and wound up on Alderaan either.
References to Spaceballs will most likely not be making any appearances either, the Death Star transforms into a robotic version of Darth Vader just like the toyline from Hasbro made it. If it even manages to Transform once before the Rebel Alliance with help from Xander and Buffy take the thing apart.
Everybody always uses Buffy, Willow, Xander or anyone else commonly used in Star Wars crossovers. I was going for something unique, so I picked Harmony Kendall. I just felt she would have more to offer, plus I didn't want to build up a team of JUST the Scoobies to fight against Blackrock and Warren. So her being swayed by the Dark Side, doubt it, maybe the original Harmony Kendall who became a vampire, but this version will be a little more competent and morally grounded.
Review By [missinglink
] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from djhardim
In a sense, Darth Vader "does" have another 'son' - C-3PO. Vader is the one who built 3PO.
Review By [djhardim
] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Not Rated