I loved the picture of Daniel waiting for the calvary to arrive and then submitting to the marriage with a world-weary sigh. ;) I also thought the idea of Tara (or someone) being trapped in the statue to be a neat one. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. I really couldn't help it, the idea of Daniel being married to a statue and then it being someone of significance that was trapped inside until he came along was just too good to not play with.
Review of chapter "Completed Ceremony" from draconis
Review:
A plot that comes from far, far, far....far off, but inventive and a bit intriguing.
Would she even want to be "rescued"? It's good to be the Goddess...most of the time.
Daniel's being atypically a tad sexist and a bit Tau'ri-centric.
Comments from author:
You know, your right about Daniel. I didn't notice until your comment. I'm going to have to figure out some way to fix that. Mostly I think Tara is confused and will want to go home.
Review By [draconis] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Completed Ceremony" from MarcusRowland
Review:
If they're told she's a goddess wouldn't their first reaction be to get their guns out? Goddess = Goul'd / Ori, not good news.
Comments from author:
Good point. Will have to write that into the sequel.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Completed Ceremony" from CPTSkip
Review:
Argh! It says The End. This must be wrong. There must be more to your story. But I'll admit it is a great beginning. Now I would love to read more.
Comments from author:
You're right, it's a beginning. There will be more.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Not Rated
