Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from Shieldage
Heh. You used my penname as a character? Huh... Is the fact that Rick Riordan from 'A new Evil' shares his name with the author of 'Percy Jackson and the Olympians' intentional?
Haven't seen much of the show, how often do they leave the UK? I know there's a book where they head to Russia...
Seems like the creatures start out employing better tactics than the humans :)
Good insight into the characters.
Ooh. I like the bone weapon. Mean.
Seems like you haven't done a Primeval/D&D/Myth crossover. I'm interested in what you can make out of dinosaurs and therapsids evolving in the presence of magic.
Far as 'evolution in the presence of magic' goes, this is one of my favorites: http://www.scribd.com/doc/40555353/FASA7105-Shadowrun-Paranormal-Animals-of-North-America
Chapter 11 - "Jenny frowned and began to sidle closer to the personnel, intent on talking to them and possibly even confronting them somewhat, when Caroline came over to her instead and thrust something to her. “What is it?” Jenny asked."
Out of curiosity, did you mean 'comforting them somewhat'? Just asking, because they're standing by themselves, being ignored by the other law enforcement.
Nice! Time anomalies are an awesome way to CLEAN a garage! :D
Good way to save Abby, Danny and Connor :)
Chapter 16 - Jenny groaned. “Becker, I am sorry, but I have thought that Becker has told you about that situation already.”
I think you need to revise this, at the very least, the second Becker should be the name of someone else at the ARC.
Time anomalies phoned in by satellite? That's playing dirty.
Review By [Shieldage
] • Date [13 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]